Basically High Score is a Video Game comic, but the character ( At least some of them ) do a lot of drugs. It gives new possibilities into the perception into video games, and blurs the line between Video Games and Reality. Plus its fun to write for. Anyways ill let you figure out the rest
http://www.drunkduck.com/High_Score/index.php?p=201343
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[PLUG/CRIT] High Score
wow116
at 9:59AM, May 10, 2007
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wow116
at 10:30PM, May 12, 2007
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deletedbyrequest03
at 8:10AM, May 13, 2007
I just read through your comic. I'll critique it for you.
First off, you copy and paste way too much. Draw your characters with different movement and angles. Also, they're all pretty emotionless. I know that they're high the entire time, but it's good to exaggerate. It's usually funnier to see the character's expression more than the things they're saying. Well, the things they say in your comic aren't bad, but it would be ten times funnier if they had more expressions than standing still all the time.
Here, I redid one of your pages to help you (and show you what I mean):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v609/DancingChaos/wow116help.jpg
(don't use)
Other then that, it's a good comic and you have a lot going for you. Just keep updating :)
~DancingChaos
First off, you copy and paste way too much. Draw your characters with different movement and angles. Also, they're all pretty emotionless. I know that they're high the entire time, but it's good to exaggerate. It's usually funnier to see the character's expression more than the things they're saying. Well, the things they say in your comic aren't bad, but it would be ten times funnier if they had more expressions than standing still all the time.
Here, I redid one of your pages to help you (and show you what I mean):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v609/DancingChaos/wow116help.jpg
(don't use)
Other then that, it's a good comic and you have a lot going for you. Just keep updating :)
~DancingChaos
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wow116
at 10:02PM, May 13, 2007
I like the suggestion, im just not thag good of an artist, plus half the time i dont really have the time to do more than a frames worth art. However i will try making a comic that stlye and seeing how it works. Thanks for the review.
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deletedbyrequest03
at 3:15PM, May 14, 2007
wow116
I like the suggestion, im just not thag good of an artist, plus half the time i dont really have the time to do more than a frames worth art. However i will try making a comic that stlye and seeing how it works. Thanks for the review.
Try to tweak the style before using it. It's still MY style ;)
No problem. Come to me if you need help.
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wow116
at 6:04PM, May 14, 2007
No, no i didn't mean im taking your style, just using multi angled "shots" and stuff like that. Im making it look as much like the original style, as i can, should have the first one done on Friday, although ill pq you a strip to show you what i mean.
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deletedbyrequest03
at 7:52PM, May 14, 2007
Heh, I know what you mean. Just a misunderstanding~
And those multi angles look GREAT. I'm serious, it makes your comic look a lot better!
And those multi angles look GREAT. I'm serious, it makes your comic look a lot better!
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