http://www.drunkduck.com/Gesen/index.php?p=723502

A b&w manga comic in which a new chapter comes out weekly. Action, fantasy, adventure mainly. I would like to know what people think about it, likes and dislikes. Thanks...
:neenjah:

Ok,I just skimmed through =) The art is adorable but:
-crayons look very unflattering to this type of comic,It makes things look messy and unfinished(more like notebook doodles than a comic)
-add more backgrounds
-ink with markers,not black crayons.Again,it looks messy
-use a ruler when you make panels and make them cleaner
-speech bubbles are also messy and hard to read.You can make speech bubbles digitally in GIMP or Photoshop.Takes practice,but the result is fantastic and easily readable

Sorry if I came of too picky,but trust me,a lot of readers get turned off immediately on this issuess. =) hope I helped

EDIT:Make a banner or a link in your signature to make your comic easily accessible.People are too lazy to check your profile first :p
There is a full tutorial in "Help,how do I..." section

Okay, thanks for your comments, I will definitely take these things on board, but I don't use crayons, I use mechanical pencils. Sometimes when scanning it doesn't come out to well, so I try to fix up the picture but as you can see it doesn't always come out to well. As for Inking, well, I have an idea of how to get that done but if that doesn't work, is there a pen you could suggest. I'm guessing not biro lol! And finally, I'm working on a banner now.

Thanks for your comments, it's nice to know someone has actually read it.