Flip's Inspective Agency is my first attempt at a serious story, and also my first attempt at a mystery story. The idea is to see if I can do a short story with an end in mind. I'll warn you the art is done in MSPaint, but I do try to put forth effort and care in how it looks, at least to my best abilities. There will be a few joke scenes scattered in, but the vast bulk is a serious detective drama.
I would like to hear your advice/suggestions/thoughts.
Thanks!
Link: http://www.drunkduck.com/Flips_Inspective_Agency/