first off, i know this is kinda shameless & sligtly bold of me, but ive finaly
created a character and story line that i feel is 100% mine. in the past ive
constantly scrapped ideas because i felt that it was too similar to something that
was already out there.

anyway, ive finaly started writing a script for the first time, for my first actual
comic ever. i'm only three pages in, but i'm rediculously proud of my currently
3 page teaser comic & the monolouge that goes along with it, i had to get somebody
to read it & hopefuly get some feed & direction.

thank you for taking the time to read, & i apoligize if you find this to be a waste
of your time, but i'm sure alot, if not all, of you can appriciate what i'm feeling
right now.


Script- Fire Kraker Issue 1: Powder Keg

Page 1: Full page image- bird’s eye view of a busy city between dusk & night. Street lights lit and inner thoughts of Powder Keg displayed in captions.

Opening Monologue: “Emperor City. The largest city in the world; the city of kings. Some of the richest and most powerful men in the country call this place home; as well as some of the most twisted and demented low lives you could imagine. You’re either makin’ a lot of noise, or you’re just another face that they say don’t even matter. At first glance Emperor City looks like a thriving, standard of living and business for the rest of the world to take notice of. But in reality, this place is a swamp."

Page 2: Five panel page. Monologue continued and finished by page 3’s end.

Panel 1- Close up shot of a politician standing at a podium in a courthouse giving a crooked smirk.
Monologue Cont. - Between the crooked politicians……

Panel 2- Medium shot of a bank heist in progress. Three masked men holding assault rifles tower over civilians on their knees with their hands on top of their heads.

Monologue Cont. – Crooks and criminals……..

Masked Man #1- Everybody keep your hands on your heads and your faces in the ground!
Masked Man #2- (screaming at the teller) What’s the code to the damn vault?!

Panel 3- Medium shot of ghoulish, shadowed figures of manic men are seen reaching out toward the screen.

Monologue Cont. – and straight up scum, this place should have been swallowed whole and shat out into a broken down pile of despair years ago by the very same defective parts that make it run.

Panel 4- A full shot of the city sky line well after night fall.

Monologue Cont. - But see, that’s where I come in to play.

Panel 5- Same shot as in panel 4. The peaceful sight of the skyline is interrupted by a powerful blast.

Monologue Cont. – You may be wondering just who I am, or what it is that I do exactly……..

Page 3: 2 panel page. Monologue is completed.

Panel 1- Hero stands in front of a burning getaway car unfeelingly. 2 men are tied unconscious to a near by pole.

Monologue Cont. – They called me Powder Keg.

Panel 2- Same scene but closed in on hero’s face.

Monologue Fin. – And I make a lot of noise.

anybody?