Ok, since I yanked all the pages earlier, I looked back through them and saw that most of them had pretty hard to read text. Naturally I am redoing the text and some dialogue. After all, the previous text was truly Toast-worthy and needed fixed.
The entire first chapter is going to be touched up like this before I start the second chapter.
On a side note, I don't feel there was enough killing in chapter 1 and some events weren't fleshed out enough. I will be adding new pages in with the updated old ones to sweeten the comic up even more.
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