Howdy.

I'm getting a webcomic off the ground here at Drunk Duck (obviously) and I'm just here to pimp it. Please have a look if you are so inclined. If you want to take the time to crit it, I would appreciate that too.

It's called Endstone.

Anyhow, this should take you to the first page:



http://www.drunkduck.com/Endstone/index.php?p=523157

Thanks for looking.

I actually checked this out a couple days ago. I don't know if it's supposed to be serious, or silly, or both. But I dig it! I really like the inking. I think the B&W pages work as well as the color ones. :)

A couple crit-type things-
The pace of the pages seem a bit rushed to me- probably what you've got in a page I would have stretched out over two or three. That might be a personal preference, though- but it kinda has a "wait- what the heck is going on, here?!" vibe to me. Which might be what you're goin' for. It does have a certain charm- kinda old school pulp.
Also- with the character design pages- I think after you get a few more story pages up, you should drop 'em, or move 'em so they're between two chapters; they kind of break up the flow of the story.

But like I said- I dig it. I'll check back for more.

Thanks for taking the time to crit my comic, Hyena H_II.

I'll try to work on stretching out the story a little (probably easier to finish a page that way anyhow) and I'll definitely move the model pages after I finish chapter 1. I was just trying to keep my comic in the recent lists (maybe that's a faux pas????).

Anyhow, thanks again.

It's that time of the month again.

No. Not that time!

It's time for another plug/crit of Endstone.

Just plugging away.

Still plugging away.

Imagine that.