Yoes (note plural form of "yo"). Just trying to get some people to stop by my humble little comic, Dragon Blood . Go check it out and tell me what you think here or there. If you got questions, you can ask them, BUT if it's something related to the plot I will most likely ignore it or answer with my best Hal 9000 imitation "I'm sorry {insert name here}, I can't tell you that." Last bit of info, please put all critiques here. I would rather avoid having a bunch of comments that go half the page. Thanks and have a great day/morning/afternoon/evening/night!

cool comic (although that's based on having seen... your two page archive).

I can't judge it on much yet, but here's some constructive criticism: you rely on scribbles a lot to color in the background, and I think you should settle for something more placid-- the scribbles are vying for attention, and thus taking attention away from the subjects of the comic.
So far the figure drawings look pretty good (especially on the second page.) I'd suggest using a thicker/darker outline on them, though, to keep them "in focus," so to speak-- to make them be the first thing the reader looks at when he/she views the panel.

nice start!

thanks KG. As to the scribbles, I'm used to using a pencil and a piece of paper, so that's how I suggest shadows, details, and anything that really doesn't have a clear shape (clouds and foliage among them). I'll probably redo those pages after I get better at using a tablet. Again Thanks for the crit! :D