Finally think I have enough pages to ask for crit, and well, plug my comic Deus Ex Machina.

Quick overview:
In the world of Midgard, only man exists. It is said that there are actually nine worlds, all connected by the World Tree, Yggdrasil, but this is a belief that has greatly faded over the years. It is said in these other worlds, gods and other deities exist... But who could believe such a thing?

Nineteen year old Saistyria has been terminally ill virtually all of his life. If he leaves his home, it will only result in him dying earlier. He was predicted to die when he is about twenty, but he is reluctant to accept his fate.

Using a spell he didn't truly believe would work, he now hosts the powers of the gods upon his request to use them, through a skill called "marionetting." With his new found companion Loki, the self proclaimed "God of Mischief," he sets off on a journey to save his own life from deteriorating.

It is a yaoi story, but that's not the main aspect of it. No PWP? here. xD

Crits are appreciated. ^^;

http://www.drunkduck.com/Deus_Ex_Machina/