Shameless advertising and getting my comic some feedback at once? Brilliant!

Why hello there, I'm new here (not the topic dangit) so I'm going to make a little mention of my new comic series (well not entirely new, I have been writing it for a month now, just posted it up here today), DeepHurting, based in the world and story of Final Fantasy XI, DeepHurting follows the adventures of the Linkshell group of the same name, as they get into trouble, all the while unbeknownst (naturally) to the world, an ancient evil is awakening.

This comic is based on the story of Final Fantasy XI, the online FF, despite that though I'm trying to make the comic as friendly to people who have never played FFXI, let alone a Final Fantasy. With out further ado, here is DeepHurting.

http://www.drunkduck.com/DeepHurting/index.php?p=476244

Hope you enjoy it, and I can get some lovely feedback.

*Bump*

Various new pages up since I made this. And yet no feed back. Don't make me make a sad face. T_T Too late.