going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[PLUG/CRIT] Club Comic
Coveinant
at 2:58PM, Oct. 31, 2007
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joined: 9-17-2007
We start our story as of 10/31/07 6:00 pm central time. This is a start I want to get some feed back.
Enter my contests and be happy about your ideas.
go here, I may have left you something good
CJ
go here, I may have left you something good
CJ
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:46AM
krazy_taco
at 3:55PM, Oct. 31, 2007
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joined: 10-15-2007
personally i am not too into sprite comics so all i can say is to try to clean up your word bubbles, try to have them sound older if possible, and use better grammer.
Keep going!
<333
:D
Keep going!
<333
:D
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:21PM
Coveinant
at 4:00PM, Oct. 31, 2007
(online)
posts: 1,768
joined: 9-17-2007
Try the Club comic, not Coveinant Journey. Also the story starts soon critique in a little bit.
Enter my contests and be happy about your ideas.
go here, I may have left you something good
CJ
go here, I may have left you something good
CJ
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:46AM
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