Hello everyone!
I've just recently joined the Drunkduck family, and I was wondering if any of you would like to check out my frist ever comic seires?
I'm still starting out and every thing, so it still in its infant stage, but I hope you all will like it! http://www.drunkduck.com/Insert_Title/index.php
Crit. is welcomed.
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[Plug/Crit] Check out my frist ever comic :[Insert Title]: !!!
crazyninny
at 7:00PM, Aug. 2, 2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:48AM
Greaney
at 10:31PM, Aug. 2, 2007
Hey dude i like what im seein so far, though im slightly confused
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:38PM
Darth Mongoose
at 1:51AM, Aug. 3, 2007
Aha, here's a comic that shows a great understanding of how to set up a scene. I could learn from that intro, it was masterfully done.
For crit:
Number one, I'm not sure if 'Insert Title' is a good name for a comic. I may be wrong, however. It may be that the title is important to the plot, in which case, it's a catchy, intriguing title. If it's called that because you just couldn't think of a name, then it's not so good a title.
Number two, minor typo, page two. It's 'painful', with one l.
Number three, you may not agree, but I feel that the cross-hatching looks a little busy and distracting. I think either thickening the object outlines or making the hatch lines thinner to give stronger shape definition, using tone rather than hatching or using pure black shade like you use on the characters would all be good solutions.
For crit:
Number one, I'm not sure if 'Insert Title' is a good name for a comic. I may be wrong, however. It may be that the title is important to the plot, in which case, it's a catchy, intriguing title. If it's called that because you just couldn't think of a name, then it's not so good a title.
Number two, minor typo, page two. It's 'painful', with one l.
Number three, you may not agree, but I feel that the cross-hatching looks a little busy and distracting. I think either thickening the object outlines or making the hatch lines thinner to give stronger shape definition, using tone rather than hatching or using pure black shade like you use on the characters would all be good solutions.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:08PM
crazyninny
at 11:28AM, Aug. 3, 2007
To Greaney:
Thanks! I hope that I'll keep you interested! But what are you confused about? Maybe I can explain a little about what's going on. ^^;
To Darth Mongoose:
Hehe. =^_^= It was nothing really, the intro could of been a lot better, but that was as good as I could get. ^_^
Its actually ::, but I can see what your saying. There is a personally meaning to it for me, and a meaning that will come up later in the story. Its not that important to the story, but it does have a meaning.
The personally meaning to me is that it reflects an old online comic I used to worship, called 'Place Name Here'. Lord knows what happend to it, becuase the site went down a llloonngg time ago.
Heh, can anyone say 'Start using spell check, Ninny.' ? ^_^;
I use the cross hatching a lot at first becuase I didn't have my copic pens yet, but starting around page 3 I think, there'll be a mixture of cross hatching and copic to shade the comic. As of screen tones, I actually don't think they would really look good in my comic right now, maybe down the road, but as of now my art wouldn't really support it. So don't worry, it'll get better!
Oh! You have a comic? I'm going to check it out right now just becuase I like you! ^_^
Thanks! I hope that I'll keep you interested! But what are you confused about? Maybe I can explain a little about what's going on. ^^;
To Darth Mongoose:
Hehe. =^_^= It was nothing really, the intro could of been a lot better, but that was as good as I could get. ^_^
Its actually ::, but I can see what your saying. There is a personally meaning to it for me, and a meaning that will come up later in the story. Its not that important to the story, but it does have a meaning.
The personally meaning to me is that it reflects an old online comic I used to worship, called 'Place Name Here'. Lord knows what happend to it, becuase the site went down a llloonngg time ago.
Heh, can anyone say 'Start using spell check, Ninny.' ? ^_^;
I use the cross hatching a lot at first becuase I didn't have my copic pens yet, but starting around page 3 I think, there'll be a mixture of cross hatching and copic to shade the comic. As of screen tones, I actually don't think they would really look good in my comic right now, maybe down the road, but as of now my art wouldn't really support it. So don't worry, it'll get better!
Oh! You have a comic? I'm going to check it out right now just becuase I like you! ^_^
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:48AM
Bocaj
at 1:15PM, Aug. 3, 2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:30AM
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