I've started a romantic comic set in a Catholic School. Its updated every Friday. Please take a look and tell me what you think. Its rated M. So far nothing of any real worth has happened but there will be some nudity, sexual content, religious content, and so forth.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Catholic_School

The page that you have up right now has some solid line work, but would benefit from variation in the thickness of your inking lines. Currently, your characters get lost of the page and the black hair of your one character is what draws the eye.

Putting some bold, black shadows in the background may help to distinguish your characters from the background and establish depth. Also, I think that varying the thickness of your inking lines will help to draw the readers eye to your characters.

I like your character designs though, and look forward to future updates.

Your character designs are nice and the overall comic layout is lovely.

I must confess, though, in this most recent page, the perspective looks off.

Finally gotten back to this comic after a brief hiatus. Figured now was a good time to bump this thread.

Had some computer issues that created another unwanted hiatus but we are back up and back to the friday updating schedule.

These constant hiatus are truly an annoyance but were back to the Friday updates.