I feel kinda stupid for putting my comic up here again, but I couldn't change the name of the other thread in order for it to include 'CRIT'. So, sorry about that.
Anyways, Arthur, King. A webcomic about a king. Kinda. It updates daily, it's a sprite and it's doing pretty good at the moment. It's not your average gaming sprite though, so I'm curious about the critique!
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[PLUG/CRIT] Arthur, King
Rutger
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Well, there are no mods for this forum, and the only one who come here on a regular basis are Revan, and myself...
So, you could probably make ten of these, and get away with it.
Also, there are quite a lot of commas in this post.
So, you could probably make ten of these, and get away with it.
Also, there are quite a lot of commas in this post.
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Well, the sprites for the comic are good and I'm very impressed that you actually move the background with the characters. I've seen too many Sprite Comics that don't.
I don't care for having different colours for reading the text, but it's your comic, not mine.
Also, Cthulhu's right, we are the only people that ever come here.
I don't care for having different colours for reading the text, but it's your comic, not mine.
Also, Cthulhu's right, we are the only people that ever come here.
Updates Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday's (depends).
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Oh well, in that case...
Seriously though, thanks for the compliment. I put a load of effort into making the panels look decent, including backgrounds and any objects I add to them. I'm a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to that, I can fiddle with something for hours, shifting it one pixel back and forth and back again.
Don't worry, Cthulhu...I use a lot of commas too.
Seriously though, thanks for the compliment. I put a load of effort into making the panels look decent, including backgrounds and any objects I add to them. I'm a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to that, I can fiddle with something for hours, shifting it one pixel back and forth and back again.
Don't worry, Cthulhu...I use a lot of commas too.
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Rutger
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That's right, I shamelessly plugged myself back to the top of the list.
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Well, *I* am glad you made a new thread about the comic - otherwise I never would have seen it. Sadly, I can't provide much by way of critique except that it doesn't make me want to poke out my eyes when I see it. I'm enjoying the plot (and today's filler) though!
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Why thank thee, fair maiden!
Ohhhhhhyeahhhhhh!
Ohhhhhhyeahhhhhh!
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Go check it Arthur's seductiveness while you still can! Story continues tomorrow, expect drama!
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New page up! Also went up from #96 to #83 in Comic Strip!
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New page!
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Just finished the 10th update, be sure to check it out tomorrow.
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Tenth update is now live! Plus I went up to #70 in the Comic Strip list! Thanks everyone for the great support and such.
So, change of scenery, and the loss of another character. Don't worry though, Abbadon will be introduced tomorrow!
So, change of scenery, and the loss of another character. Don't worry though, Abbadon will be introduced tomorrow!
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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Also, remember to PQ me with questins for the Ask Arthur Sunday Special~!
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New page up! Introducing ABBADON!
Excitement and drama all around!
Also, still accepting questions for the Ask Arthur Sunday Special!
Excitement and drama all around!
Also, still accepting questions for the Ask Arthur Sunday Special!
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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Look, I'm on top again!
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I liked your latest page less because there were no Battletoads in it. ;)
I think yours is probably one of the better sprite comics out there, though.
I think yours is probably one of the better sprite comics out there, though.
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Thanks man...and rest assure...the toad will return...
OOH SUSPENSE! IT'S LIKE SOMETHING SUSPENSEY!
OOH SUSPENSE! IT'S LIKE SOMETHING SUSPENSEY!
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Rutger
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The next Arthur, King will be up in a few hours! Suspense!
lso, new character introduction, plus the foreboding of a flashback! How can you say n to such awesomeness?
Also, still taking questions for the Ask Arthur Sunday Special. PQ me, put them in the comments or simply post them in this thread...it'll get to me one way or another.
lso, new character introduction, plus the foreboding of a flashback! How can you say n to such awesomeness?
Also, still taking questions for the Ask Arthur Sunday Special. PQ me, put them in the comments or simply post them in this thread...it'll get to me one way or another.
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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Oh, my god. A sprite comic that's actually.... clean. Very nicely and neatly done, along with an interesting story. And loyal little Abbadon. Can he stand up to the might that be King Arthur?
Though, one thing that's setting of the little grammarian in my head: your "thous" and every derivative. "Thou" is the familiar form of "you", and I seriously doubt that Arthur there would be talking to Mr. Frogman as if he's a buddy.
And, uh, that's it! I'm never good at conclusions.
Though, one thing that's setting of the little grammarian in my head: your "thous" and every derivative. "Thou" is the familiar form of "you", and I seriously doubt that Arthur there would be talking to Mr. Frogman as if he's a buddy.
And, uh, that's it! I'm never good at conclusions.
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Rutger
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Hey man, thanks for the compliment.
I know Arthur's medievil tongue isn't all up to scratch, but it's a bit of a parody thing. I just throw whatever I can think of in there to make it sound like he's all suave and stuff. Hell, he even forgets the accent sometimes :p
Anyways, the relation between Abbadon and Arthur will be explained soon enough...stay tuned.
I know Arthur's medievil tongue isn't all up to scratch, but it's a bit of a parody thing. I just throw whatever I can think of in there to make it sound like he's all suave and stuff. Hell, he even forgets the accent sometimes :p
Anyways, the relation between Abbadon and Arthur will be explained soon enough...stay tuned.
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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I'm sorry, what?
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Tnorrows update will be a special treat. Also, check out Otamie's comic Aqua Les Paul
Tha's right, we Dutchies stick together.
Tha's right, we Dutchies stick together.
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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Tnorrows update will be a special treat. Also, check out Otamie's comic Aqua Les Paul
Tha's right, we Dutchies stick together.
YaY! i gots featured! thanks pall ;D and indeed, we dutchies need to stick together to FIGHT TEH POWAH! XD
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If I like music from the Netherlands, can I get featured? :)
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If I like music from the Netherlands, can I get featured? :)
Yes you can. In fact, after you checked out todays Arthur, King, why not head over to trevoramuellers comic, The Temple Of A Thousand Tears
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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ON TOP AGAAAAYUNNN!
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I just spent an hour putting an army together. 60 separate soldiers. In sprite. Rar.
You had best check tomorrows comic out, I ain't doing this for the funof it.
Well I am. But also...I forgot where I was going with this.
OH LAWDY!
You had best check tomorrows comic out, I ain't doing this for the funof it.
Well I am. But also...I forgot where I was going with this.
OH LAWDY!
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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Hey look, stuff's going on at my comic. lolwut
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Then I had a wank
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Couldn't resist.
Then I had a wank.
Then I had a wank.
K.A.L.A.-dan! rutGAR desu!
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