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Kaylove at 4:22PM, Oct. 21, 2008

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Some constructive critique/comments would be welcomed, its basically a shoujo manga comedy about an art school student named Max who has disguised herself as a boy in the name of art.
Some aspects are a little cliche, but hell I love cliches XD
Please forgive the art on the first few pages, which are traditionally inked and were done a while ago, the characters have recieved some makeovers since then.

Also it reads right to left, like traditional manga, which I now regret doing XD
http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

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Starbraces at 8:30PM, Oct. 21, 2008

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Even though I'm not a fan of manga... it's quite nice, actually. The art is cute and pleasant, and despite being a Shoujo clichÃ© (but what Shoujos AREN'T?) I like it. I'm also glad you didn't go with the Wapanese approach on names, because stuff like that kills my soul

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Kaylove at 12:57PM, Oct. 22, 2008

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i only wish I hadn't done the right to left manga layout, cos even though I'm used to it, other people probably aren't

I could never bring myself to give my characters japanese names unless they were actually japanese, and I pretty much have no idea in which country my story takes place... its not particularly relevant, so I just decided to omit that detail XD!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

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Kaylove at 4:30AM, Oct. 29, 2008

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http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/index.php?p=478620

Updated today ^_^

http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

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NickGuy at 8:23AM, Oct. 29, 2008

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first off let me say i love your avatar. HAW!

secondly...i actually really dig the right to left. its something new ive enever seen on here before and seeing as i read shonen jump religiously, its nothing new for me. though i do think you should put a disclaimer on every page so people who are reading it for the first time know that.

great art style! faved!

"Kung Fu Komix IS...hardcore martial art action all the way. 8/10" -Harkovast
"Kung Fu Komix is that rare comic that is made with heart and love of the medium, and it delivers" -Zenstrive
"Kung Fu Komix is...so awesome" -threeeyeswurm
"Kung Fu Komix is..told with all the stupid exuberance of the genre it parodies" -The Real Macabre

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Aghammer at 11:52AM, Oct. 29, 2008

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Love the new update... and manga studio!! Sweet. This is a highly recommended manga!

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Kaylove at 5:32PM, Oct. 29, 2008

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Nickguy, thanks ^_^!
that avatar photo is like, a year old XD i think i look like a dragqueen with all that makeup :P
I think im gonna have to go through tha pages and edit their descriptions, oh noes V_V

Thanks for the suppert Aghammer ^_^

http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

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Kaylove at 1:12PM, Oct. 31, 2008

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http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/index.php?p=479537
Halloween Pin-Up posted!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Art_School_Sub_Rosa/

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honey bucket at 1:51AM, Nov. 1, 2008