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[PLUG/CRIT] Aleion
Sechs at 7:07PM, Nov. 5, 2008
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Hi,

http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
Constructive feedback would be helpful. I realize I only have a few pages posted, but I'm working on that.
Thanx! Yes, I spell "thanks" with a "x".
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Sechs at 5:04AM, Dec. 19, 2008
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I realize don't have any near the amount of pages as other comics on this site, but any criticisms and suggestions would be appreciated!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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harkovast at 10:12AM, Dec. 19, 2008
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Every comic has to start with just a few pages.
I gave you some comments to look at.

For more Harkovast related goings on, go to the Harkovast Forum
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Sechs at 6:18PM, Feb. 12, 2009
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Thanx for the insightful input Harkovast!

But it is once time again for me to plug and ask for more input about Aleion. Every opinion matters. Hopefully, 10 pages is enough to form a view.
Thanks in advance for reading Aleion!
Sorry forgot to post hyperlink!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Sechs at 6:40PM, March 6, 2009
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Well, it's almost Spring!
Hopefully, I'll avoid a deux ex machina ending...
Any comments or interest are welcomed. I love replying to myself...
Just follow the link and enjoy the ride.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Sechs at 3:03PM, April 14, 2009
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Well, it's April already and I haven't made much headway with my comic.
Hopefully, I'll avoid turing it into a trainwreck...
Any feedback would be helpful!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Sechs at 7:08PM, May 21, 2009
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What can I say? It's May and some input/attention would be greatly appreaciated right now.
Share your thoughts on what you like or dislike.
Feel free to rate some pages.
Just follow the magic link.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/

Thanx!
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Sechs at 6:04PM, June 27, 2009
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Ah, another month, another reply to myself...
Enough self pity, it's time to plug and seek critcism for Aleion!!!
What do you like, what don't you like.
Please be honest, any constructive feedback is helpful!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Muus at 6:36PM, June 27, 2009
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I like your comic; the writing is great and quite accurate, but the quality of the art may be distracting to some readers. If you developed your art style a bit more, it would tie everything together. Aside from that, great job! It's nice to finally read a comic that uses epic myths correctly. I look foreward to reading more Aleion soon, so keep up the good work.
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Sechs at 10:17PM, June 27, 2009
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Thanks a lot for the feedback. I really appreciate it when people notice the seeminigly obscure references I use.
As far as my artwork, it is still developing and I like to integrate different techniques/styles in order to suit the writing. I should devote some more time to practice to become better.
Cue the training montage!
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Sechs at 5:10PM, Aug. 10, 2009
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July was sad month, but August seems more promising.
Time for me to appeal the Drunkduck community for critcisms and to plug Aleion.
Be warned, the plot is the middle of a flashback...
Please be honest, any opinion is a worthwhile opinion; except for flames.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Sechs at 3:20PM, Sept. 18, 2009
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Once again it's time to plug and seek criticsm for Aleion. Hopefully, the slow release hasn't caused anyone to forget it existed.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
On a side note, my brushes need replacing though I'll miss them.
Can anyone suggest a dignifed send off for them?
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Sechs at 5:29PM, Oct. 19, 2009
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Wow, I'm necro-posting my own thread!
Once again it's time to plug and seek criticsm for Aleion. Now, that the flashback is over, I can return to the present with next week's installment. The current page might not make sense without reading the previous pages.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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Sechs at 3:32PM, Dec. 14, 2009
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It took me 25 pages, but I finally finsihed my first arc.
As always, I'm grateful for any plugs and criticisms.
Using mythic figures can make things confusing, yet I'm addicted to them.
New Year's resolution, more pages per week!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion
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Sechs at 7:24PM, Jan. 11, 2010
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With the Chimera's vacation over, she's back to work.
I've introduced Albert Garou and the Intern, her co-workers at Aleion.
The next arc starts this month.
As always, I'm grateful for any plugs and criticisms.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion
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Sechs at 12:50PM, Oct. 4, 2010
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After several reformatting attempts on my PC, I finally get a new page out.
Looking back, the previous page was more of an extra then part of the story.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Aleion/
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