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[PLUG/CRIT] Adventures of sonic and shadow
bluebot092 at 7:03PM, July 12, 2008
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only one strip so far but still its funny as hell
I don't have ADD you're just boring me.
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Fysh at 8:16PM, July 13, 2008
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I must say it is a major improvement over your last comic, and don't get me wrong it can turn out great, but you put "Crit" there and that's what I am here to do.

First, I must strongly advise against sprites, as there seems to be a hate for them. If you dont draw well, make your own sprites. This will give you something 90% of sprite comics don't have,originality.

Second, I notice not to many forum goers are fond of you. This is a big deal considering they can be your audience. Try spelling correctly (even if it takes you longer), and not using abrieviations like "wtf" "lol" "lmao" while on the forums. Don't make very many threads and try to fit all you need into one. Having two threads in the same sub-forum on the same page is a bad thing. It makes it harder for people to be able to help you if they have to thread hop all over the place.

Third, a certain word had no reason to be thrown in there. You could have left it out and had the same effect you were after. In your past post you have told us you are 12. I am not your parent, but for everyone to know you are 12 and you cussing like a sailor makes a bad first impression. My 4 year old niece can say words. To know the meaning behind the word and how to use it intelligently is an art.
Think of it this way, your core audience should be to your age group. Showing that you can say a word doesnt mean anything.

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