going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!

[Plug/Crit] A Supervillainy Comic
Freegurt at 9:23AM, Feb. 17, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Howdy everyone! I've been here for a bit and my comic has been up for a bit, too (with little updates until now). But I feel I should show it to everyone since sitting around doing nothing won't get me any readers, haha.

There are very few pages up at the moment but I am working diligently to get as many pages up as I can to really get this comic up and rolling (not to mention how long it takes to make a page, augh!).

All right, my comic is pretty much like a superhero comic, but switched around so it focuses on the super-villains because villains are so much cooler than the hero. Admit it, you know I'm right.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php?p=460060

The story follows Doug, a happy and rather obnoxious sidekick and Exile, a temperamental giant. Both of which are rather good at what they do as they rise to evil-dom. It's most definitely not a serious comic, but also not too silly or outrageous.

Check it out, would ya? I'd love some critique to make it look less bad and improve upon many other things. :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
makosuite at 11:50AM, Feb. 17, 2009
(online)
posts: 31
joined: 1-24-2009
Could use a few more pages to tell exactly where it's going, but so far so good. Easy to read, easy on the eyes.
"If you can only visit one, visit Vivid Imagery!"
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:50PM
Freegurt at 1:59PM, March 27, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Hey again! The comic has been updated a few times since I last posted this. Check it out! There's definitely going to be two more pages this week so keep popping in!

Just click the ad! Woo hoo!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 3:30PM, March 28, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Hey hey hey! Two more pages have been put up. Go check 'em out!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php?p=539300
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
BffSatan at 3:23AM, March 29, 2009
(online)
posts: 1,471
joined: 3-2-2008
I'm enoying reading Doug N Exile, it's a good comic. I think if I had to crit something it would be the last page, it just felt a little dull. Usually this is the case when the focus of a page is one very big pannel and that pannel itself isn't that interesting. i would say the same about the first page, in a comic book you can get away with this but not in a webcomic.
This is just my opinion and I hate to sound overly negative, crit generally can't sound positvie, but this is a very good comic, the art is great, the story line is very interesting, it gets a laugh out of me when it needs to and the tone is just awesome. I will be following this comic as it is a good comic.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:20AM
Freegurt at 9:50AM, March 31, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Hey, you're awesome BFFSatan. And I don't think that you're being negative at all. Just very helpful! In fact, I have to agree with you. The last page really isn't the greatest. The big panel was going to be a full body shot, but it ended up in disaster, haha. I gotta practice on my action shots.

Anyway, thanks again. I'll do what I can to keep the pages up to (a good) standard. ;)
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Pirka at 5:52PM, March 31, 2009
(offline)
posts: 19
joined: 3-27-2009
I like the comic a lot! I much prefer the art style in the later installments, but it's nice to read it from the start. The speech is clear and easy to read and the colors are fitting for the characters. I like how you portray the features of Jo's face with just shading. He reminds me a little of what would happen if Roscharch was just an average Joe.
I read from beginning to end and I look forward to more!
~ Pirka ;)
last edited on July 14, 2011 2:44PM
Freegurt at 10:09AM, April 1, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Thanks a bunch, Pirka! I really appreciate the comment. But I'll tell you this, Joseph is far from an average Joe. ;)

.......

On another note:

Sad to say, I don't think there will be any updates this week. My computer is still at the shop and the one that does work, doesn't have Photoshop or even a scanner. :\ But look forward to next week everyone! It's going to get better. And don't forget to mention, there's going to be some more action! WOOP.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 10:43AM, April 4, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Good morning everyone. Just writing in to tell y'alls to pop into my comic!

It hasn't updated-there is a filler page, but that doesn't count-but I'm just here to tell all of the newcomers to check it out! You won't be sorry, I can tell you that.

First page is here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php?p=460060

Most recent page is here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php?p=542681

Peace out-!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 10:31AM, May 22, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Hey hey hey! The comic just updated with two new pages! They're much better looking than the last few, so go check it out! Really!

Just click that signature of mine and you won't be disappointed!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
dcole at 2:19PM, May 22, 2009
(online)
posts: 73
joined: 2-24-2009
Just one, abbreviated word:
Fav'd.
Daniel Cole
Writer/Artist, Carbon and Space
Magazine Editor, The Frontiersman
www.brokenfrontier.com
Twitter: @CarbonandSpace

last edited on July 14, 2011 12:09PM
ZULU94 at 1:29AM, May 23, 2009
(online)
posts: 68
joined: 11-19-2008
this is pretty cool, & a great idea. (a little something like an idea that i had thought about for a while but never did. maybe i sould pick it back up) the only problem that i have with it is that it just seems a little too random, almost like each page is a self contained story, that sometimes ends and sometimes continues throughout other pages. but otherwise this is pretty good.
O o
/¯/___________________________ _ __/
| IM A FIRIN MAH LAZOR BLAAAAAAAAAAARGHH!!!!
\_\¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯ ¯ ¯¯\
last edited on July 14, 2011 5:02PM
Freegurt at 9:24AM, May 23, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Thanks for the fave, Dcole!

And thank you for the input, Zulu. I'll try what I can to make my comic more consistent!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
ZULU94 at 12:21AM, May 24, 2009
(online)
posts: 68
joined: 11-19-2008
wait, my bad. that was the other villans comic. something about a high school........

anyway, yours is awsome. i cant believe i forgot to favorite it. thats y i
got it confused. keep doing what you're doing!
O o
/¯/___________________________ _ __/
| IM A FIRIN MAH LAZOR BLAAAAAAAAAAARGHH!!!!
\_\¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯ ¯ ¯¯\
last edited on July 14, 2011 5:02PM
Freegurt at 6:09PM, May 24, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Well, okay then. I'm glad that's cleared up, haha.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 1:43PM, May 31, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Another page has been slapped on up! Go read it! Go read it! Go read it! GO READ IT!

http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 10:16PM, June 5, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
YES. Another page! Why haven't you read it yet?

Go read it! It is amazing and filled with wonder and magic!
Okay, not magic, but it's cool nonetheless.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 10:19AM, July 13, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Hey hey hey! I've finally been able to update again! Life outside Drunk Duck has been rather busy as of late.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Doug_N_Exile/index.php?p=584745

But here you go! Another page to satiate your hunger for awesome.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 8:43AM, July 17, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
What's up? It's updated again, so just click that link in my sig!
|
|
|
V
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
The Real Macabre at 11:04AM, July 17, 2009
(offline)
posts: 74
joined: 11-14-2008
Great comic! Brisk pace, great visuals, and interesting characters. Nice work!
. .
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:15PM
Freegurt at 11:35AM, July 31, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
Thank you very much, Macabre.

Anyway, I've posted another reply because I'VE UPDATED THE COMIC AGAIN.

Click on that silly little signature of mine down there and feast your eyes on something marvelous.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 6:40PM, Oct. 9, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
I haven't posted to this thing in forever.

Well, I've updated again. Since the last time I've posted there have been even more pages to munch on.

Read it, I demand that you do!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM
Freegurt at 4:43PM, Oct. 20, 2009
(online)
posts: 331
joined: 11-24-2007
I have updated again. Click the link.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:31PM

Forgot Password
©2011-2012 WOWIO, Inc. All Rights ReservedAdvertisement