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[PLUG/CRIT] A Bit Cheesy
Fitz at 2:04PM, July 7, 2007
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A bit cheesy comic, you might say. On top of always being beaten down by Ryan, now Mick has fallen in love with a girl. Quite the tragedy for the shy guy that he is. But THAT is not his biggest problem. There's... something else...

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=239264

My first attempt at drawing anything in many, many years, so please be understanding :)
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deletedbyrequest03 at 5:42PM, July 7, 2007
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Wow, I love your paneling :D

Great job!

This year, school's full of BS!!!
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chiizu at 4:49PM, July 8, 2007
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Actually, I love the art and coloring. Excellent work!
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Fitz at 10:13AM, July 9, 2007
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Thanks for the feedback :D I really appreciate it!

Now I'm only wondering if the comic's funny ;)
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Fitz at 5:25PM, July 18, 2007
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New page up! Go here: http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=246485

To read the comic from the start, just click my banner.
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Bocaj at 5:46PM, July 18, 2007
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THIS COMIC IS GOOD.

I RECOMMEND IT.
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Fitz at 1:29PM, Aug. 4, 2007
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New page is up:
http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=256037

This is a fun episode, my favorite so far - with tricky riddles for my readers, even. Why don't YOU give it a try? :)

If you're a first-time reader, click my banner to go to the first page of my comic.
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Nepath at 4:46PM, Aug. 4, 2007
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Like the comic. Really well written and very clean artwork.
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Bocaj at 3:06PM, Aug. 5, 2007
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Great new comic!
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Fitz at 10:56AM, Aug. 16, 2007
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I made all the pages of my comic slightly bigger. They were 640 by 880 pixels before, now they're 770 by 1059.

I'm currently working on page 6, and I just realized the 640 by 880 just wouldn't do. Some minute details would be lost - and it annoyed the hell out of me. So I decided the page has to be bigger. 770 is the optimal width, I think. It will be convenient to read without scrolling sidewise even if you have your monitor set to 800x600 (I'm assuming there aren't many people out there who still use 640x480). The image seems more clear to me, and sharper, too. There's definitely more detail. I love it that way. The lettering got kinda huge, but it doesn't bother me all that much.

Hope ya'll enjoy :)
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Fitz at 4:51PM, Aug. 19, 2007
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Check out the latest page at:
http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=264675

First time readers - click my banner to go to the first page :)

Enjoy!
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Ersatz at 1:45PM, Aug. 21, 2007
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A Bit Cheesy has many prefixes of 'well' --

well written
well illustrated
well planned
well designed
well plotted
well organised
well paced
well........ cheesy!


I heartily recommend this comic, Fitz is one hell of a DrunkDuck contributor!
The Unitary Authority of Ersatz: Not so much a place as a waste of time.
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Fitz at 11:24PM, Sept. 2, 2007
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Brand new and still warm - another page of my comic.

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=272052

And so I've become one of those who'd rather sacrifice their sleep than be late with the comic update. Went to bed at 3AM, got up at 6 to go to work. Fun! :)

Hope you'll enjoy!

P.S. To read from the first episode, click on my banner.
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Fitz at 11:47AM, Sept. 15, 2007
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A new page is up: http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=279169

Sort of a bonus, but also a regular page, concluding Chapter 2. For those of you who've been waiting to see The Girl, here you go!

That's not all. The next page is coming Tuesday/Wednesday - since this one's a short read, I just feel I can't keep my readers waiting another two weeks.

Now, go see the latest page. To read from the first one, click my banner.
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Fitz at 4:04AM, Sept. 20, 2007
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A new page, and the beginning of a new chapter. There's romance, there's envy, there's despair - and last but not least: pretty colors! :)

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/?p=281131
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trevoramueller at 1:22PM, Sept. 20, 2007
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It's amazing to me that a page which features almost no people (feet and a silhouette, sure) can be so dynamic and interesting. Your page focuses on the background (a butterfly on the window), and the shots from outside the building are very voyeuristic. I also love your coloring. Your water effects are very well done (and I'm a fan of water effects), however subtle.

Keep up the good work!
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Fitz at 5:12AM, Sept. 30, 2007
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A new page is up. Get your umbrellas, everyone, 'cause it's raining cats and dogs. And mice.

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=286249
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harryq at 8:08AM, Sept. 30, 2007
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Master Fitz definitely has it going on both art and story. I've been a fan from darn near the beginning. Recommended for discerning readers all over the universes!
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trevoramueller at 10:01AM, Sept. 30, 2007
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Love the rain effects by the rear taillight of the car, how the water picks up the color. Little things like that are what make a comic stand out from the rest!
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Priest_Revan at 11:20AM, Sept. 30, 2007
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The art, the drawing, and the colouring is pretty much perfect in this comic.

Perfection is beautiful. Awesome comic.
Updates Tuesday, Thursday, and Saturday's (depends).

7/0

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Fitz at 1:29PM, Sept. 30, 2007
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Wow, thank you sooo much, guys! :) Reading such wonderful coments makes all the effort worthwile!
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Abt_Nihil at 3:00AM, Oct. 9, 2007
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One of my favorites on drunkduck, with both incredibly well though-out script & artwork.
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Fitz at 7:57AM, Oct. 15, 2007
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New page up:

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=294069

The new page brings you:
- Mick and Ryan in full splendor again (I know some of you missed them)
- more drama, despair and laughs
- a shocking reveal :-O
- new, shiny insects (a little treat for those who loved the spider)
- and, as always, all sorts of eye-candy and pretty colors :)
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trevoramueller at 9:10AM, Oct. 15, 2007
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Another kick ass page with the water / rain effects. I love the first panel, with the rain hitting the statue.

The colors on your characters don't seem to reflect the same style as your outdoor effects have been. Have you been doing this on purpose?
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Fitz at 11:38PM, Oct. 15, 2007
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Depends what you mean. If it's about the characters being cel-shaded while I apply soft shading to pretty much everything else by now - it's partly out of convenience/laziness, because they're complex objects, so to speak, ergo difficult to shade. And I'm still learning that difficult skill. But mostly it's that I draw this comic sort of to look like stills from a cartoon - where the backgrounds are usually painted in a more or less realistic manner and the characters are... well... cartoons :)

If you mean the particular shade of yellow, which differs quite a bit from the golden color theme from the previous episode - I just like to experiment with colors, and in this one that shade of yellow brings fits better with the blue hues.

Hope that explained a bit?
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trevoramueller at 9:25AM, Oct. 16, 2007
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Yeah, I meant the first one. :P
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Fitz at 12:28AM, Oct. 30, 2007
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A brand new page:

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/index.php?p=299969

The previous page left you with a shocking reveal and some sort of a cliffhanger. This one brings you...
- a yet bigger surprise!
- some laughs, hopefully :)
- an overload of cuteness!
- and, as always, pretty colors!
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Fitz at 10:08AM, Nov. 7, 2007
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I touched up the latest page a bit, improved the shading, looks more natural now. Or at least I hope it does!
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trevoramueller at 2:30PM, Nov. 7, 2007
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Oh goodness, that puppy is still just so darn cute!
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Fitz at 8:49AM, Nov. 13, 2007
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A new page :)

http://www.drunkduck.com/A_Bit_Cheesy/?p=308456

The new page brings you:
- a beginning of a new chapter
- a bunch of tips what to buy for a dollar and reasons not to do it
- and last but not least, pretty colors (I've been dying to use this new color theme)
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