Hey I have only been here for a few weeks and now that I have more than 10 pages, I would like some rewieves/suggestions-for-imporvement.

PirateRPG is a comic focused around two main characters and their idiotic lives. There is a plot in the comic, thought it may not look like it. The comic mixes popular rpgs or games into the story, which most people will hopefully be able to recognize. My main goal with it is not generating a deep story line or being 100% original (though these things would help) but rather to amuse.

Be gentle, I am new,
Thanks