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Read and reviewed...what'd I ask? LOL!
<--- short term memory loss! LOL!

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well done mate i see youve taken alot of time into your frames Altough at some points the backgrounds coulda been richer whens in other times youve taken ALOT OF time into it.

i dont like furries i loved them when i was 16 or so but now i down right hate em since its so far away from human faces and You can get away easier with proportional errors and i always strive to improve In all directions and i guess theses are supposed to be human animals so i mean maybe take a trip to Human land and return just to see if you can get something out of that. i dont know if youve actually Have gone there i drew alot like you
befor tho ALOT like you i might add.

well done anyho i see alot of persistance and alot of stylage and i like that but im just getting the feeling that this has a pretty non Epicism over it i dont know i might be wrong you cant judge by a few pages but i mean youve done alot and i dident get the hint of it becoming much more then what it is i guess I dont know really.

anyho good job and keep going would really want you to try drawing somehumans your furries ill get TONS better not that they are bad but better is always better =D

Mistchiff
well done mate i see youve taken alot of time into your frames Altough at some points the backgrounds coulda been richer whens in other times youve taken ALOT OF time into it.

Hey, man, thanks for the long, in-depth critique. It's much appreciated.

Yeah, my background do vary a lot. Sometimes I skimp out, sometimes I go all-out. And I'll heed your advice for taking a trip to "human land". =) I'm definitely not a perfect anatomical artist but, like you, I strive to improve, and I find that the best way of doing that is through practice.

My comic is actually an apic, but it might be a very slow-paced one. A lot of the history and larger forces at work still remain hidden, even after almost fifty pages of story. Believe me, though, I've barely scratched the surface of some of the things going on behind the scenes.

And also, I see a similarity between your comic and mine. You art style has a real "Naruto" influence to it, and mine has a "Sonic" influence to it. There is a major difference, though, that my comic is a fan-comic, while yours is completely original.

Again, thanks for the encouragement and critiques.

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That is SOOO cool! I'm on your cover for the CW event~! WOOTS!!

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