Triple N.
Updates- Irregular
Warnings- Gay, lez, furry, underage.
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Nice_The_Naughty_The_Neo/index.php


So, whadya think?

You did not supply a link so I will critique what you have posted.


This is terrible porn. Truly abysmal. Porn must be based in some sort of (even vague) realism to be attractive. Go, right now, to hentai-foundry dot com (very very NSFW, you have been warned). Look at their guidelines. Try to submit something. If you get rejected chances are your porn is awful.


Anatomy. Learn it. Right now. Or GTFO of the porn business.



Best wishes,
Charlie

It isn't something porno experts like yourself are supposed to jackoff to.

I mean really, and if you realism there's suck a thing as- well I dont know, NOT PICTURES DRAWN IN PHOTOSHOP. Like I dont know, real people on a dvd?

And if I was really aiming for attractive, do you think I would be using Neopets; A site dedicated to fictional, virtual creatures where marsupials have wings, and dogs have tails twice the length of their bodies?

Same goes for that 'Anatomy' deal.

If you clicked on this thread because it said it was a comic that is NSFW, and were hoping for something to get off on, I'm sorry "Charlie", but you need a life.

Or a hooker you can pay fifty dollars a night to pretend that she's you girlfriend.

Even more lovely wishes,
A Tranny who rather dislikes duckes like yourself.

Ah so I see you are M2F then. Well I myself am F2M which you would know if you read my wonderful and genius comic the scarlet robe.


What the hell is the point of drawing furries having sex if it is not erotic? And trust me, PLENTY of people luv some sonic on knuckles action. Go to deviant art, you'll see what I mean. If there was a point to your work OTHER than sexual content you would have a case. As it stands, you do not.

I did not click on your thread for something to "get off" to. If you looked at the rest of the HELWID section you will see that I just like reviewing webcomics. You asked for a crit I gave it to you. Deal with it.

Plenty of people draw realism with crappy programs. Somebody did the mona lisa in MS paint for god's sake.

If you think people are going to read your work for the marvelous plot development and not the "neopets" getting it on... Well then you just don't understand the internet.


Best wishes,
Charlie

Ayla to Adrian, but I'd rather Identify as both or neither indefinatly, but that's not the point.
(And really, you thought I was Male to Female? Why? Because I draw boobs?)

And really, would you judge someone on their first three words? Becuase I only have three pages up. And obviously NNN isnt something that's supposed to be taken seriously. what with soundeffects like 'Shhlp', rapists making ':D' faces and all.

Critique doesn't mean telling someone, especially a new artist plugging a comedy genre comic to 'gtfo', and that the suck. It means giving pointers on how the artist can improve and make themself better.

Talent has nothing to do with the medium. True. But obviosly I'm working on it, if you had even taken the second to go to my profile, and click on my comic, you would have actually seen the diffrence from page 1 to page 3.

And again, with soundeffects like Shhlp in be shiney bubble letters during tentacle rape, it's hard to take this as anything more that cheap and crass humor, people who think it's porn spend way too much time on 4chan. And I'm not drawing it for them.

Sincerly,
Signing off like this is like the endall end for sarcastic posts neh?

I simply do not understand your motivation. That's all. I critiqued you under the impression that you, like 99% of the internet, were simple minded and boring. As this is not the case let us move on.

Perhaps we could be friends.

to Charlie.



Best wishes,
Charlie.

It's not as bad as charlie_everyone says. The art does need work but it's not a complete right-off. Try to make your characters look closer to actual neopets. Study the art on the neopets site if need be. They are hard to recognize as neopets at the moment and when I saw your sample page I thought your comic was a general furry comic rather then based on neopets.

istaerlus, thankyou :) I tried to translate their one-foot-tall completely animal look into something a little more humanoid, but I guess it didn't translate all that well, hm? Definatly something to work on, but drawing beastiality makes me a little uncomfortable, and I'm sure my room-mate would have me commited if she ever saw that kind of stuff on my C drive, aha ha.

Charlie, motivation? For the shits and giggles ofcoarse :)!! And thankyou, and I replied under the impression that you were just another troll. As this was also not the case, I agree,

let us be friends.


Adrian is my first name, but I prefer Amefu for the sake of the confort in anonymousness.

I read your comic, left a few comments. T'was entralling and eloquent, looking forward to more.

I wouldn't draw them animal like either ^_^. They're just not very recognizable at the moment. My advice would be work on their faces, that should get the message across, and keep the bodies anthropomorphic.