Ello, this is my first post on the forums! <3 Anywayz, Im currently creating a new manga that I hope some of you guys can go check out and comment/crit it! wierd fact...every page I have done so far has gotten a little better somewhat. lol
http://www.drunkduck.com/Fallen_Dreams/index.php?p=256266
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[Plug+Crit] The Fallen (New Rated T Manga)
TheFallen
at 6:34PM, Feb. 6, 2008
(offline)
posts: 19
joined: 8-4-2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:16PM
Warpedwenger
at 9:52PM, Feb. 7, 2008
(online)
posts: 1,756
joined: 4-3-2007
Not much to judge on so far but the art is very professional looking. The bit of plot that has been revealed was quite intriguing and original. I have fav'd.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:47PM
TheFallen
at 10:48PM, Feb. 7, 2008
(offline)
posts: 19
joined: 8-4-2007
yah, I have only drawn the first 5 pages so far and a couple of pictures. but thanks for looking at it and the fav!
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:16PM
Warpedwenger
at 7:34AM, Feb. 8, 2008
(online)
posts: 1,756
joined: 4-3-2007
NP! Keep up the good work.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:47PM
albone
at 9:05AM, Feb. 8, 2008
(online)
posts: 413
joined: 10-27-2006
You got a pretty nice comic, for what you have posted. The fillers, are personally annoying. I like story and plot than pretty pictures, at least from a webcomic I'm reading. The lettering is a good size, but the font it a tad rough for my tastes.
The art is solid, and the writing is good. I love the drama!
The art is solid, and the writing is good. I love the drama!
You are part of the rebel alliance and a traitor!
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:48AM
TheFallen
at 6:28PM, Feb. 8, 2008
(offline)
posts: 19
joined: 8-4-2007
hahah thanks for ur input albone! at first i was going to make a page just for art for the story, but the day after i could never find the link for it anymore. i dont understand how other comics have their own links for stuff, hmmm, amybe i will figure it out sooner or later. lol
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:16PM
Warpedwenger
at 8:23AM, Feb. 9, 2008
(online)
posts: 1,756
joined: 4-3-2007
Some people post extra stuff in their comic forum.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:47PM
TheFallen
at 10:48PM, Feb. 9, 2008
(offline)
posts: 19
joined: 8-4-2007
ive seen that before, but i have also seen comics like Rainbow Carousel has a link at the top for art. hmmmm
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:16PM
©2011-2012 WOWIO, Inc. All Rights Reserved
