This is my comic.
It is a sprite comic, and I use mostly edited/recolored sprites with hair and that kinda crap. It's about a bunch of weird, semi random crap happening to my characters. I use a combination of MSPaint and Paintshop.-Insert rest of description-

The writing is bad, the action is bad, the dialogue is bad, there is no set story or even theme, you constantly break the 4th wall and the effects are some of the worst I have seen.

on the plus side the edits/recolours are pretty good, If you had a well written and consistent storyline and added a few little extras (like the occasional sound effect) then you might have a remotley respectable sprite comic.

the thing I was impressed by was the low ammounts of directly ripped sprites, most are at least edits and that is a very good thing.

Well, I'm happy. I've never got a plus side from Mimarin before.

WHY?!

WHY ALL THE PANEL SPACE?!

*cough*

Your panels are massive, you sprites are tiny, it's a Huuuuuge waste of bandwidth and it looks terrible. I know fitting the panels TO the sprites is like, effort, but please thinks of all the Drunk Duck bandwidth your wasting on blank page space.

Uh, ok. I'll work on all that stuff.Why he moved: No idea.

ScorchGofer
Uh, ok. I'll work on all that stuff.Why he moved: I'm actually going to edit that one to have a motion blur.

you better not just be saying that, because that is what happens with sprite comics you know, you explain what is wrong then they fail to actually do anything about it.

I'll make my criticism:

Bad:
* Too big panels. That means, lots of empty space.
* On the last one, the giant blue thing looked well as a glowing effect or such, but using it as a giant blue fireball that never changes it's shape isn't a good thing.
* The giant robot thingy
* The thunder effect thingy on Round 1-2 and round 2-1 or whatever looks like an iceberg with a guy inside
* I don't really know what happens from panel to panel on some places.

Good
* Those edits are okay.
* You set a panel size instead of making a panel, then another of a different size, and such, having them all look bad.
* You actually used speech bubbles
* Acceptable grammar

Suggestions:
* The sky have clouds
* Sounds effects could be appreciated
* When someone is tired or gets damaged, some comments, expressions or such could come handy (Argh!, *pant pant*, etc.)
* Try to avoid all the bad things on your comic and correct them. I don't want you to remake the comics, only to don't make the same thing again.
* Lots of people hate randomness. Me, well, I think that randomness is good up to a certain limit. Try to not reach that limit, and better be good random.

Egnio
* On the last one, the giant blue thing looked well as a glowing effect or such, but using it as a giant blue fireball that never changes it's shape isn't a good thing.

uhm, It's not a fireball, it's a giant crystal.

Egino
* The thunder effect thingy on Round 1-2 and round 2-1 or whatever looks like an iceberg with a guy inside

The blue thing? Yet again, a crystal.
I suppose I could make Shard's teleport a little less humuongous(did I spell that right?)

Then, make it clearer that it's a cristal... and I've never heard a word similar to humuongous