Well, finally started chapter 5 and have got a few pages in. This is an epic fantasy/sci-fi adventure, so be ready for the long haul.



http://warofwinds.com

BWAH HAH HAH!!! Okay, now it's about 55% shinier. And sparkly---but that's only the reflection of moonlight off the blood. Don't let the shiny part fool you. It ain't a froof comic.

Comic update! First real update in a month, check it out!

Ooo, and another! Kinda proud of this page *pets* Check it out! Click da siggy!

Cast Q update! Readers get to send in questions to characters, and they get answered every wednesday. This week's question was asked of Ravar (the tough guy), "what's your favorite flower?" I find it amusing. The link to the question can be found on the main page, in the news box beneath the comic.

My newest page took over 12 hours to complete. I hereby declare this thread open for pimpage season, while I go a finally get some shuteye.

I've reopened tWoW's DD mirror. http://www.drunkduck.com/The_War_of_Winds/

Crit if you can, but of course, go and check it out!

I've got a foot in the door to chapter 5, so I figured it was time for another pimp. The top post has been edited with an image.

Dude...we can forgive you for double posting, triple posting is bad but forgiveable, quadruple posting is REALLY stupid...but 8 posts in a row? Let some other people post here, dude...

Try looking at the dates of the posts. They are weeks apart. So, rather than creating new threads, I'm simply reusing the same one. Got a problem with it? I don't give a care.

You really need to work on the positioning of your people - they look like stiff robots in some panels.

Nice work overall :-D

Yeah I do agree with the above post. Good start, but my basic advice is to focus on your line work a little bit more, then work on your coloring. But it's definatly very nice, I personally like how you're trying to develop your style. ^_^ Keep up the high quatlity work.

I like the story so far.... it's certainly very intersting! ^_^

Thanks for checking it out all.

carly_mizzou: my line work has always been pretty mediocre, but unfortuntately, most of it is caused by the rush to get the pages up. I once put up page uncolored with better lines, and a buncha people had a hissy fit. :lol: I guess the color is well-liked. I also need to get like, art pens. I using cheap gel pens at the moment, 'cause well, college takes all my money :(

hat: uh oh, that's not what I like to hear. Could you point out a page where they look so stiff? Lately I've been trying to add a lot more movement to my pages, but I know there are a lot of nuances I haven't picked up yet. And I know the beginning pages are pretty much horrible, and they all look so stiff, but I hope my current work is better.

Aurora Moon: Thanks^^ I hope you continue to check back.