Cheak out my new Comic strip. "Void If Removed" It's great!
Its got lightsaber weilding badgers.
It;s got Penguin mounted Laser cannons.
It's got Zombie Clones.
It's got batman! and aslo BatApe and Alexman! (you've probably not hered of the last two.)
It's got Evil Orange Jelly Babies!

All this and more! (Although there isn't much there yet. but there will be! )

Go cheack it out and leave coments. Go on! Tell me I'm crap! as long as you also tell me how I might not be crap anymore.

Void_If_Removed

www.drunkduck.com/Void_If_Removed

A little bit of bumping just to get this nere the top again.

Feeling somewhat unloved really as nobodys replyed to this.

Come on ducks! Come to www.drunduck.com/Void_If_Removed and really slate me!

I want to be criticised.

consider this an open invitation to rip my work apart stitch by stich and tell me how I when wrong at every stage.

Alternitivly you could say something nice. that would be good too.

I went through your archive briefly and noticed several spelling errors.

Your line work is pretty solid, although when you don't use color your characters tend to blend into the background a little too much for my eye. The latest page of your comic looks like it has inverted colors, and the handwriting is a little difficult to read at times.

The inverted colors aren't a bad touch, but again your character gets lost on the page. Perhaps filling in the cat or making borders around your comments would help them to stand out a little bit.

trevoramueller
I went through your archive briefly and noticed several spelling errors.

Your line work is pretty solid, although when you don't use color your characters tend to blend into the background a little too much for my eye. The latest page of your comic looks like it has inverted colors, and the handwriting is a little difficult to read at times.

The inverted colors aren't a bad touch, but again your character gets lost on the page. Perhaps filling in the cat or making borders around your comments would help them to stand out a little bit.

Thaks for coments
the spelling errors are due to my Dyslexia I try to check my spelling but things slip through. anybody who wants to Point out specific spelling errors is welcom to PQ me and I'll update that perticular comic page.

The Cat page was a bit of an experiment. Its ment to look like chalk on a chalk board. I like the simplistic cat but I think maybe there is just too much in the way of wordification.

Thanks for the coments. anybody got anymore out there?

The comic overall is very messy... mainly the line art. That fact that you colour doesn't help make the lines looks any better (to be honest, the mistakes show even better in the colour).

I also noticed several grammar errors that you should work on (for example, you'll capitalize a word in the the middle of a sentence).

I also noticed several grammar errors that you should work on (for example, you'll capitalize a word in the the middle of a sentence).


Again that a dyslexia thing. I should spend more time prof reading.