From the creator of Brood Knight comes another comic (like it such a big deal... lol)

Anyway, here it is:

http://drunkduck.com/MAG_ISA/

First of all, way to go for wearing all of the creator hats on this. It's no easy task. The story starts out pretty good, interesting hook. Coloring is okay, you have light sources all of over the place with no main one to speak of.

The art needs some work. In the first panel the flag is not in perspective as the rest of the panel. Kind of a nitpick but noticeable. The guy doesn't look right. Perspective and anatomy issues are glaring, and you may want to use some reference when you draw. I think it would go a long way.

thanks for the crit.

I'll try to improve on the next pages. lol my first page in the comic sux. haha.