Set in such exiting locals as the comic book store, the office, and the Featureless White Void, Awesomataz is (mostly) the saga of Ted, Gary, Emoly, Torgo, Steve The Douchebag, and a ghost train who also happens to be a porn star, among others.

I've been doing this comic on a small message board since April, and I would love to hear some opinions from outside my general audience of six people.

If you like the Smoke Manmuscle comics, I've already written two comic book-length stories (including the one teased at the end of Vertigo) which you can read once I get around to launching the Smoke site.

Anybody?

I don't really see anything wrong with the comic (besides it being computer drawn and cut 'n paste...).

I can read the text and the humour is okay. I thought I was going to be clicking on a sprite comic, but all is well.

As long as I'm rated above "not a sprite comic", I'm okay. The second I'm a sprite comic, I'm in trouble.

It's a little bit wordy for my tastes, but the art direction is somewhat amusing. Has a nice clean digital look. You can tell who is talking and who is who. Nothing really looks bad. Yeah, it's alright. Not for everyone though.

I admit, I'm not writing great American literature, though I am proud of what I'm able to do with what's essentially MS Paint stick figures.

Credit where credit is due, baby

I was going to link eventually, you less-than-one bastard.

I've tweaked the style a little bit, added skin tones, backgrounds, etc. I'm really pleased with how it's starting to look.