This is a webcomic project I am undertaking with my girlfriend. I am the penciler/inker/writer and she is the colorist/co-writer. As you can see, some pages are colored and some aren't. That's because I have drawn and inked some pages while my girlfriend has not colored them yet. As she colors them, I will update them. The non-colored versions are also not edited.

GENERAL PREMISE:
The premise is set in the near-future, where people have the technology to switch minds between each others' bodies.

Here it is:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Anatta/index.php?p=501074

I have nothing to critique. I like the b/w pages. I like the color pages. Heck, there is not a single page I didn't like. (page 4! it is awesome! :D)

The premise of the story seems super interesting.
I really liked it. I'll be reading now :)

Wow thanks, Ludeshka! I just started reading your comic and it seemed very interesting but I had to go, so I will start reading it again.

I'm really enjoying this!

Every page is filled with details that are meaningful to the story and characters. The black and white pages are so well inked (page 7 is the most memorable for me) and the colored pages are well colored. Using the TV as exposition in the beginning is a nice smooth way to segue into the story while providing background information. The concept of trading minds and the women dealing with the repercussions, juxtaposed with the television stories and posters about it in the background, is really interesting. I'm going to keep watching this for sure.

Tiny criticisms:

The first word on the first page is "Odyssey," spelled "Odessey." I thought it was intended until the second page, in the background, when "Odyssey" is spelled normally. It is spelled normally again on page 5. On page 7 there are several small errors: "dalughter," "extention," and in the last sentence "I've been working for the them." I mention it only because the work is of such high quality!

Hey Ochitsukanai, thank you so much for pointing out the typos for me! I actually fixed all the typos except for Odyssey but didn't post them because I want to post them all at once. It is too time consuming to post them one at a time. But again, thank you for pointing out the Odyssey one or else I would have missed it.

Color versions of page 6 and 7 have been added!

yay for updates!

Oh man, your signature is bigger than my signature... it's like the story of my LIFE.

Page 9 has been updated! Yeah!

If we keep this up, we will have a million pages in no time!

2 page updates in two days? BLASPHEMY!

Okay theres two of you. I get it. I'll put in a plug for this series. It looks fantastic. And the story has bee really interested. What I thought was going to be the set up for some sort action story looks like it is going to be used for a indepth look at what makes us, us. And if it goes that way I think you guys are going to be able to craft a wonderfully moving story.

This series doesn't look bad to me at all. I really like the care and detail you take to the scenery and cityscape, and the dialogue is very good.
I've only taken a cursory glance at the story and don't know yet where you're going with it, but I do like what I see so far.
Keep up the great work!

the2ndredbaron, that is definitely a large part of what we are trying to do. Hope you will enjoy it. :)

houseofmuses, well Good t hear that it doesn't look bad. :P I am glad you liked the dialogue. I understand that there may be a lot of questions at first and you may not know what's going on. Largely it is intentional because I think delivering a story and a world through implicit methods engages the reader to play an active role in finding out just what the world is about. Read on for a few pages, hopefully it will intrigue and engage you as well. :)

Updated! Pg.10!

Page 11 updated!

Update! Page 12!

Updated again, yay.