I'm slowly building up a fan manga using my own characters based off of the Japanese anime show Keroro Gunso, written by Mine Yoshizaki-san.
I'm 18, from the USA, and have drawn the pages using Manga Studio ex4.
Thanks for reading or CRITing my work.
Link to post 1 - Front cover:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Kaeru_no_Uchuu/index.php?p=548461
I try to add 1 new page per day, has 8 pages as of today.
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[PLUG - CRIT] Kaeru no Uchuu
Yinsho
at 8:49PM, April 21, 2009
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last edited on July 14, 2011 4:53PM
Yinsho
at 4:27PM, April 26, 2009
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Up to 9 pages, the cover and an intermission page. :)
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:53PM
Esyntha
at 5:51PM, April 26, 2009
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Hey, I enjoyed your comic so far ^^ Faved it even
!. You should size your comic to a more appropriate 800px by 1200 px. It fits the page better and people wont have to horizontal scroll to vewi everything. http://www.drunkduck.com/Letter_From_Here/index.php?p=552503 <--- my comic at 800 by 1.2k
2. The character design is cute and simplistic which is nice and refreshing! And your backgrounds are well done, better than mine cause I ABSOLUTELY suck at drawing backgrounds. You should also try inking your drawings in one layer and colouring in the next. and then background all the way in the back.
3. The writing is good, the title makes sense for your japanese manga/anime fan crowd. but you should offer up a translation and notations signifying honorifics and other japanese culture references so as to not alienate potential readers.
^...^ my 2 sense on your comic. please return the favour ^^
!. You should size your comic to a more appropriate 800px by 1200 px. It fits the page better and people wont have to horizontal scroll to vewi everything. http://www.drunkduck.com/Letter_From_Here/index.php?p=552503 <--- my comic at 800 by 1.2k
2. The character design is cute and simplistic which is nice and refreshing! And your backgrounds are well done, better than mine cause I ABSOLUTELY suck at drawing backgrounds. You should also try inking your drawings in one layer and colouring in the next. and then background all the way in the back.
3. The writing is good, the title makes sense for your japanese manga/anime fan crowd. but you should offer up a translation and notations signifying honorifics and other japanese culture references so as to not alienate potential readers.
^...^ my 2 sense on your comic. please return the favour ^^
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:22PM
Yinsho
at 5:20PM, April 28, 2009
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Thanks for the post, and the CRIT. :)
I'm afraid I can't scale down the image, without losing most of it's quality.
I draw the pages in Manga Studio, which why they are so big.
Also, I'll go back and edit the pages to add translations and notes. :)
Another benefit of using Manga Studio. :P
I'm afraid I can't scale down the image, without losing most of it's quality.
I draw the pages in Manga Studio, which why they are so big.
Also, I'll go back and edit the pages to add translations and notes. :)
Another benefit of using Manga Studio. :P
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:53PM
Yinsho
at 5:04PM, May 1, 2009
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No new pages till I get more batteries for my wireless mouse. =_=
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:53PM
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