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[PLUG & CRIT] Day of the Nano Twister/Gloop and GLop PIXELIZED/Perfect/My Life as a Teenage Webcomic/Journey of the Mad Professors/ALL MY COMICS
lemon_king at 6:59PM, March 17, 2008
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http://www.drunkduck.com/Day_of_the_Nano_Twister/
Day of the Nano Twister

http://www.drunkduck.com/Journey_of_the_Mad_Professors/
Journey of the Mad Professor

http://www.drunkduck.com/My_Life_as_a_Teenage_Webcomic/?p=376363
My Life as a Teenage Webcomic

http://www.drunkduck.com/Gloop_and_Glop_P_I_X_E_L_I_Z_E_D/
G&G Pixel. (NEW COMICS THROUGH THE 20TH!)

http://www.drunkduck.com/Perfect/
Perfect(NEW COMICS THROUGH THE 20TH!)

Any comments are welcome!

If it's not sane to spell words with your Cheerios, I don't want to be sane.
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YourNobody at 6:42PM, March 18, 2008
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Day of the Nano Twister: 0/5
The Good
I honestly couldn't find anything good about this comic.

The Bad
It's yet another lame attempt to be like Bob and George. Mega Man is an idiot, Dr. Light is a drunk, Dr. Wily is incompetent as a villain. Yeah. We've seen this all before. It's been done to death. Now I'm going to kill it once and for all.

The strips are saved as JPG's, which is always a bad idea for a sprite comic. Save your strips as PNG's.

The strips look rushed, like they were only done in a minute. The author didn't even take the time to arrange the panels correctly.

The Ugly
Apparently, the author has no spriting experience, and in the course of a year authoring this comic, his skills haven't improved at all.

Journey of the Mad Professors: 2/5
The Good
This one is at least an attempt at a drawn comic.

The Bad
I have no idea what's going on with the story. Also, it's way too early to know what's going on.

The Ugly
So far the author has only copy and pasted the same ship over and over for each panel. In the latest strip, it only looks like he recolored the existing ship to make a new one.

My Life as a Teenage Webcomic: 3/5
The Good
Once again, an attempt at a drawn comic.

The humor shows a bit of promise, but it's really hard to say at this point.

The Bad
Like the last review, it's really too early to tell what kind of comic this will be.

The Ugly
The Paint stuff... Well, it's a starting point, but I really think you could try something more detailed.

Gloop and Glop: PIXELIZED: 2/5
The Good
The art, while simplistic, was much more insteresting than the other comics so far; however, that's all this comic had.

The Bad
Blinding colors, much? Yeah, my eyes literally hurt from trying to look at the strips.

The Ugly
Random comedy is only funny if you understand it. You clearly don't, so stop trying to do it.

Perfect: 4/5
The Good
The humor really hit the sweet spot on this one.

Glob looks like an interesting character.

I think that this comic has the most potential out of the others.

The Bad
Again, while the effort is there, I would really would rather see this done in a different program or by hand.

The Ugly
No ugly this time! So far... XD

I think you're trying to become popular too fast with your comics. A lot of authors think that if they make a lot of comics, that means they'll attract more readers. Sure, but not many authors can handle that workload and other obligations. I'd say, find a comic you like most and stick with that one.
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lemon_king at 4:48PM, Aug. 13, 2008
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I'm taking your advice. I dropped comics down to Nano Twister, Perfect, and Gloop and Glop.

I was trying too hard to become popular, and now I'm stopping. I amd going to try to ssve Nano Twister with some writing. Hint*Wiley isn't dead*.
I was focusing on a cartoon for a while, but after it became obvious I will never suceed, I stopped.

Thanks for your advice.
If it's not sane to spell words with your Cheerios, I don't want to be sane.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:34PM

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