Set in an alternate version of Earth in which all myths are true, Tengu Arm is the story of a young man named Riberato who, when his dream is denied, takes matters into his own hands by making a deal with a local demon. The comic updates on a Tuesday-Thursday-Saturday schedule* and can be found here: http://www.drunkduck.com/Tengu_Arm/


*schedule subject to change


EDIT: could an admin or mod or someone correct my spelling error in the topic title? Obviously I meant "plug" and not "plig"

Sounds interesting.

Though it only has about two pages, I can't say much. I think you should put some shading or maybe some colour to separate the characters from the background to minimize confusion. It doesn't have to be extreme, maybe make the background darker or have less detail than the characters.

I hope that was of some use to you. I'm not the greatest at critiques. @~@

I agree with Freegurt. I think the characters will look better with shading, and the artwork's kinda...well, the proportion seems ugly to me and the characters looks too solid and 2-D, their cloths for example.

Thanks for the advice. Unfortunately you won't see my attempts to use it for another week or so, as I already have the next three pages set to auto-upload.

I agree that I definitely need to work on my proportions, but speaking as somebody who has actually seen my sad attempts at shading, I'm not so sure that would improve the comic. 0_o

Well, it doesn't hurt to try your best, I am also trying to add shading to mine, but it ends up being kinda random because I normally leaves the background empty, so it suddenly came with shading and puff, a bit randomness.