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deletedbyrequest03 at 8:15PM, Sept. 3, 2006

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Hey, everyone. I was going to wait to do this, but I might as well post my comic here, since I wanna improve... I'm only 3 comics in, though.

Anyway, it's about three guys in high school. One, always angry and kinda punk, another, an annoying emo kid that just hangs out, and the last, which hasn't been introduced to the comic, yet.

I probably know what I need to improve on, artwork-wise, since I'm a perfectionist, but I can't seem to actually do what I find. I don't know. It's just... my artwork is lacking.

My artwork has always been lacking!!! *small emo tears*

Well, anyway, before I bore you to death about my meaningless problems, here's my comic:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Black_Streaks/

Or, you can click the picture in my signature. But I don't think you care.

Well... if you wanna comment on my site, feel free to. I'm open to any advice.

Enjoy.
~DancingChaos

This year, school's full of BS!!!

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Sombrerin at 8:30PM, Sept. 3, 2006

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Well, this its my critic =D (I can, right? xD) Well, I like the style, its like a darkness design, but its good at the eyes, I can say, that the only mistake I see, its the backgrounds, more of them, the houses, it looks little sharpen (I dont know if thats the word) a little simple, but the other things are good, the characters, the design of them, and the story =D

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deletedbyrequest03 at 8:36PM, Sept. 3, 2006

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Haha! I know! I have to work on the backgrounds! They're my biggest worry, right now ^_^

Thank you!!!

This year, school's full of BS!!!

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deletedbyrequest03 at 10:56AM, Sept. 4, 2006

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So... is there anything else I can improve on...?

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BigFishComic at 1:02PM, Sept. 4, 2006

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I actually liked the backgrounds. it gives the comic like a kiddy-story-book feel or something, I can't really explain it but I like it.

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deletedbyrequest03 at 2:09PM, Sept. 4, 2006

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Thanks ^_^

I know what you mean, but I really wanna give it a realistic kind of image. Hey, can anyone tell me how I can do that?

This year, school's full of BS!!!

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Frail at 2:18PM, Sept. 4, 2006

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I don't know if you really want to hear this, but I found your comic absolutely hilarious. (Maybe I'm easily entertained?)

I'm not altogether good at backgrounds either. But everyone seems to say that the best thing to do is use picture references.

Very nice art overall. Your linework rocks and so does your use of toning. (I'm not good at toning. Heck. I don't even know how to do toning.)

I can't judge your story too permanently until there are more pages. But so far it seems to be moving along nicely. I shall have to check back and follow along. ^_____^

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deletedbyrequest03 at 4:47PM, Sept. 4, 2006

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Wah? Of course I like compliments!!! Thank you so much, I'm glad you found it entertaining!!! ^_^

Yeah, referances are good... It's weird, I keep telling people to use referance pictures, but I have never used one myself.

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So, thanks a lot for the comment ^_^

This year, school's full of BS!!!

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