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[Crit]Nancy the Necromancer
Aeon
at 9:51AM, Sept. 15, 2006
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:46AM
Frail
at 11:28AM, Sept. 15, 2006
Before I start off, I might as well mention that I adore Necromancy. (Weird, yes.)
A'ight.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nancy_the_Necromancer/index.php?p=86411
In the last panel the circle mark is missing from Nancy's skull-hat-thing.
Aaaand...That was all I could find wrong.
Under good stuff,
You are very good at consistency. Your coloring is very good and your toning (I think that's what you call the black and white version of coloring) is excellent. That and your art style is really cute. (In a good way. I'll admit, I 'awwww'ed when I first saw Arandu.)
To top it off, your comic actually has some nice humor as well (at least I found it funny. XD)
Yay for Necromancy! *being quiet now*
A'ight.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Nancy_the_Necromancer/index.php?p=86411
In the last panel the circle mark is missing from Nancy's skull-hat-thing.
Aaaand...That was all I could find wrong.
Under good stuff,
You are very good at consistency. Your coloring is very good and your toning (I think that's what you call the black and white version of coloring) is excellent. That and your art style is really cute. (In a good way. I'll admit, I 'awwww'ed when I first saw Arandu.)
To top it off, your comic actually has some nice humor as well (at least I found it funny. XD)
Yay for Necromancy! *being quiet now*
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:30PM
flaak_monkey
at 11:37AM, Sept. 15, 2006
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:29PM
Aeon
at 12:31PM, Sept. 15, 2006
Thanks so much for the kind comments, Frail. I have a soft spot in my heart for that zombie, so I'm really glad to hear you like him, too.
About that skull thing: D'oh! It's like how I always forget to put the tops of Nancy's gloves in until the last possible minute.
About that skull thing: D'oh! It's like how I always forget to put the tops of Nancy's gloves in until the last possible minute.
last edited on July 14, 2011 10:46AM
deletedbyrequest03
at 6:27PM, Sept. 15, 2006
Wow! What a cool comic ^_^ I love the art style! Although your main character is slightly disproportionate. Her heads too big; but if it's your style, then don't change it :) Keep it up! It's great! (I shall favorite!)
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:04PM
ccs1989
at 7:24PM, Sept. 15, 2006
I'll read it soon, because the art is solid and stays at a level of consistancy, but I recommend changing the font to something more comic-like.
www.blambot.com is where you can get that font.
www.blambot.com is where you can get that font.
http://ccs1989.deviantart.com
"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
-Henry David Thoreau, Walden
"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
-Henry David Thoreau, Walden
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:37AM
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