I got a lot of great feedback and advice when I asked for a critique on my other comic, so I figured I'd try it for Greetings and Salutations.
So...please give me a sense of what I need to fix. Thanks.
Greetings and Salutations
going away - Hey Everyone Look What I Did!
[crit]Greetings and Salutations
Generic Human
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last edited on July 14, 2011 12:34PM
deletedbyrequest03
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Nice comic :D
Hmm... You should try to fix the beginning comics a little. Meaning, shrink them down. They're really big, and I shouldn't scroll to the side so much just to read them!
Also, please work on your humor. It's cute, but it really didn't make me laugh.
But the artwork gets better throughout the comic. I really like your style :) Keep it up! ^_^
Hmm... You should try to fix the beginning comics a little. Meaning, shrink them down. They're really big, and I shouldn't scroll to the side so much just to read them!
Also, please work on your humor. It's cute, but it really didn't make me laugh.
But the artwork gets better throughout the comic. I really like your style :) Keep it up! ^_^
This year, school's full of BS!!!
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:04PM
Generic Human
at 3:43PM, Sept. 16, 2006
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yes, yes I should shrink them down. I forget people read the early ones! they suck hardcore.
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:34PM
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