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[Crit]/[Plug] Soulless Through the Ages

Generic Human at 11:19AM, Aug. 25, 2006

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What I really want is advice on how to do things better, or people to point out what sucked most about the comic so I could fix it.

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Daemon at 6:30PM, Aug. 28, 2006

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I see nothing wrong with this comic. Some anatomy issues, but nothing "OMG KEEL IT PLEESE!" Love the colors, style and story. Make it better? Can you actually get any better? XD

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Titch at 10:17PM, Aug. 28, 2006

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I took a quick dip. Seems pretty good to me. I would say go more extream with your angels on the action scenes. A decent angle can make a punch/kick really seem like it hurt.

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magickmaker at 5:41PM, Aug. 29, 2006

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Um, word bubble placement would help. Sometimes the order can be slightly confusing.

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Generic Human at 11:47AM, Aug. 30, 2006

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Thank you guys so much. I agree with every point made. I'll work harder. Especially on anatomy.

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Mimarin at 12:24PM, Aug. 30, 2006

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the most noticably dislikeable thing for me was the guns http://world.guns.ru/main-e.htm [world.guns.ru] is the website I use for reference when designing gun related items.

Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.

Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!

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