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[CRIT] Zos Kias
Kojika at 8:13PM, Sept. 8, 2008
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joined: 12-7-2006
So, I've been running my webcomic for over two years now, but I've still got a long way to go in regards to it. I wish now I had made it black and white (screentoned) instead, but it's way too late for that. Too bad >.>

But, basically, I've had unofficial reviews and critiques from fans and friends, even some random people, along the way, but I'm still not happy with the final result. Few of them have really helped me develop as a comic artist in any way. So, if you would please, I'd appreciate someone to go in and review my comic, Zos Kias .

Of course, I don't expect you to jump in and look it over without knowing what it is. So, here's also a summary:

"Being a part of the gatekeeper's sepcial clean-up crew is never easy! From vampires to new magick users, there is never any time for breaks! But, the fighting is the easiest part about it...

Mizuno Umishin has been a member for a couple years, but he has yet to do any real fieldwork as he's lacking a partner. When he goes to find his...it's not what he bargained for! But now, the real question isn't whethe Light is up to the task...it's whether Umishin and Light can ever get along and become true partners!"


Any help, advice, and comments you can give me are much appreciated! Just go easy on me ^^;
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:20PM

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