I'm always looking to improve, so... critique away!

It's available for viewing Here .

Thanks for your comments in advance, everyone.

~Kris

Oh I don't like this comic at all. But the author is so pretty I just can't stay away

;)

I'd say, just work on figures a little more.
But by the same token, it's a stylized comic so you can only do so much.

kingofsnake
Oh I don't like this comic at all. But the author is so pretty I just can't stay away

;)

Sweet, my evil plan of taking webcomic world by storm based on looks alone is working!

Woooorkiiiing!

Kris, your Layout on TEOM is not Safari friendly :)
It's cool though, since no one uses Safari.

I think that the writing has improved a lot and the art has really improved since the beginning of it. I should make a real unbiased critique sometime.
;)

I like your comic because you've given yourself room to experiment. Your art has improved a great deal, but the figures still seem a tad on the static side? The coloring you use is very nice in the later versions.

......

...and you're way curvier in real life! Your character in the comic should show that off a bit. Since you can draw it the way you want, why hide?)

-Roguehill

The figures looks a bit, static i suppose. But besides that i really like it.

Oh, and one of your characters kind of looks like one of my ex-girlfriends. I wont say which one..

Zac
Kris, your Layout on TEOM is not Safari friendly :)
It's cool though, since no one uses Safari.

I think that the writing has improved a lot and the art has really improved since the beginning of it. I should make a real unbiased critique sometime.
;)

Hey! I use Safari! You're right about the first part though, the "TEOM" layout does not work good with a Mac. The comments are spaced from here to New Jersey!

But I that's really the only thing I would change. "This Ego of Mine" is a great comic in my eyes. Your art is really something, and I love your use of colour. Your style is really stylized and the writing is always good for a laugh. Your characters are loveable, but like others have, they can be a bit static. They need to look more animate and lively with their positions. Anyways, I like how you work in scenarios from your real life, it all cooperates really well. Keep it up! ;)

Actually, I really like this comic. It's got some very relatable, realistic storytelling. Then again, I work everyday with one of my exes and we act EXACTLY the same way around each other. The visual aspect is always improving which is all that anybody can really ask.

February Bump!
60th page now up, critique away!