http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Seven_Shades_of_Grey/

Please tell me what you think about the story and the character designs.

well yeah you need to work on your art ALOT like alot alot.

i dident even care for the story as the art was so lame i just i couldent go further.


A tip AMP your art skills and people will actually be intrigued to read what your creating.

also your panel work is pretty weak aswell make A gap between each panel it ill look Better.

maybe doeset matter in this type of comic tho i dunno i like it that way anyho.

well atleast i gave it a try =D

Thank you for being honest.

Now that I think about it, a gap between the panels would add more definition to the transitions.