Ok so I haven't gotten my comic critiqued for a while.
It's called The Last Quest and don't judge the comic by the name because the name fits the comic perfectly. (i am not THAT unoriginal)
Well I guess there isn't too much more to say so...
You can either click the link in my siggy or follow this link:
drunkduck.com/The_Last_Quest
(if that doesn't work put a / at the end)
Thankyou so much!

ano...
please critique I want to get better.
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I just cheked out your comic. You recently started to use seperate panels, and it looks a lot better than before. you get the story told pretty well, and that is what matters most :)

The characters are really cute, but like mentioned in previous crit's, more experience with anatomy will only make them better in the future. you could always get someone to pose for you, or pose yourself, so you know how a cetrain position looks and feels like (I do this all the time, especially with hands...otherwise I put the thumbs on the wrong side :p)

Contrast: whether you are telling a story, or drawing a page, think about contrast:
fast action scenes stand out even better if there are slow parts in between (and you do this already naturally). this also goed for your drawings: think about night vs day, big things vs small things, frames that are filled with stuff vs calm, almost empty frames.. you get the point. It will give that extra something to your comic..

I have to agree with Nightlights comment.

The comics story is very good and well told. The anatomy, of course, needs some work. You could, like what NL said, get a model, or just go for a drawing book or something. A book may be more expensive, but an RL model might not be easy to come by.

Uh, work on the text a bit. It's legible, but could look better.

Also, good job on adding the borders. It does look better.

Thankyou so much for the advice! I really appreciate it. Yeah my anatomy is progressing quite slowly but I do use my own hand for a model as well lol. Might try to get RL model depending on where I am and the circumstances. I need to add more variety to my panels. I have been reading lots of manga to help me. Thanks again you guys are awesome!
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