This is my first comic on here, and I would really love some peoples oppions on my work. I'd like to know what you think, whether it's good or bad, as long as you're honest. Thanks in advance :)
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Door/
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[Crit] The Door
Hunchdebunch
at 5:47AM, May 24, 2009
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Emily Elizabeth
at 6:12AM, May 24, 2009
I think its great! I love your cute disney styled art, and the plot is really intriguing. You also plan your pages out very well, and it keeps it moving! Please keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens! :D
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Hunchdebunch
at 6:29AM, May 24, 2009
Wow I didn't realise my art looked disney style, but I kind of see what you mean now that you mention it, and I love Disney, so that's cool! :) I'm glad you like the plot, I wasn't sure what people would think of it. I'll be updating often, so don't worry! :D Thankyou!
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AwesomeUnicorn
at 11:34AM, May 24, 2009
I think you're off to a really good start, and it looks like you're trying a wide variety of physical positions and angles, so you're going to get a lot of practice doing a lot of different things. Which is great for any skill level. Even though there's only a few comics up, I'm already starting to enjoy the story.
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:13AM
Hunchdebunch
at 2:53AM, May 25, 2009
Thankyou :) Yeah I'm trying really hard to make each panel interesting, and I'm defitely getting a lot of practice drawing figures. I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
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Hunchdebunch
at 8:54AM, July 17, 2009
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The Real Macabre
at 11:00AM, July 17, 2009
The sotry moves at brisk pace, which makes it easy to read. Nice work!
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Hunchdebunch
at 9:50PM, July 18, 2009
Thankyou :) I was worried about whether it was too fast paced lol but that's put my mind at ease
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Hunchdebunch
at 5:09AM, Aug. 13, 2009
The Door now has 38 pages, and is actually almost finished! :)
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Hunchdebunch
at 3:26AM, Sept. 8, 2009
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Hunchdebunch
at 12:10PM, Sept. 14, 2009
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