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[CRIT] The Amazing Adventures of Spiggen and Zadadah
Kilroy at 12:10PM, May 5, 2007
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http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Amazing_Adventures_of_Spiggen_and_Zadadah/

What is this comic about? Good question. There are two main characters, Zadadah and Spiggen, and from there... it's just whatever pops into my head. That doesn't make it a "random humor" comic where it's supposed to be funny when a character spontaneously says "hamster" or something of the sort. It just means that the storyline is a touch peculiar.

Any suggestions you have for improvement would be loved by me (just like the passive voice).
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last edited on July 14, 2011 1:15PM
Kilroy at 2:40PM, May 10, 2007
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Salvete? Adestne nemo? Sic nemo venient, dolebo. Cupetisne me dolere? FACETISNE?! Sic hanc linguam scis, dulcium tui dam.

Yeah. Anyone want to critique my comic?
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last edited on July 14, 2011 1:15PM

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