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[CRIT] Superman VS. My Character Creation
Huxley at 5:27PM, June 6, 2006
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This is a WIP. The first WIP I have ever posted on the internet. No hard critiquing yet because last time I posted that pic on age and skill I was teased and stuff so this is just for fun. I did a quick illustration of Superman and inked him. I will color him soon then get started on this sequential art.



Ohh and my characters name will be ninjadoo and this will be a comic that uses alot of blacks. You can't really tell it is super man so I am gonna color him if I get on later today. I was kinda inspired to do this in order to get better so I can stay on par with literacy suks.

Ohh and do you think I should make the cross hatching better or just leave it? OK enjoy this pic.
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ccs1989 at 6:24PM, June 6, 2006
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AWESOME inking, dude. However I'll need to see more because you kinda over stylised this.

Can you show us some of your sketches?

EDIT- As a bit of a critique, the arms look too short. But overall...wow.
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Huxley at 6:41PM, June 6, 2006
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Thnks, ohh yeah I didn't even notice the short arm.
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Barguest at 6:43PM, June 6, 2006
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Most badass man. Ace shading.
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Huxley at 7:05PM, June 7, 2006
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Ok, here is page one. Yeah I know it sucks but I kinda rushed cause I am gonna start a dd site for this minicomic and I wanna have a page up already. I need to pratice with panel flow and the clearness in panel two. That is a close up of the guy in the hoody and he is wearing a metal mask over his eyes.On the next page I will do I will try to put more details in it to lessen the confusion. Ohh and I might put up a sketch thread for that CCS1989.

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Huxley at 2:15PM, June 8, 2006
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Hmm, photoshop doesn't ink as well as I need it too (Cross hatching isn't too good) . So I am getting a new program so this project will have to wait for a while. Also I will be doing pencils for pages instead of 100% digitally which will make it look alittle more proffessional. Well, yeah I will put up a sketch page.
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