I've been planning this story for years and have finally pulled it all togeather in a webcomic.
So what do you think? Is the storyline good? The artwork?
The story so far:
Starts off on Earth, but is set in a galaxy far from our own. A youn man called Jack meets a strange lizard man who takes him into the forest to run from something in the shadows.
Link:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Planets_of_Felin/
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[Crit] Planets of Felin - a sci-fi comic
Bimbo_Zombie
at 8:10PM, Jan. 8, 2007
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:22AM
JillyFoo
at 9:23PM, Jan. 8, 2007
I can't begin to critique your comic because it's almost impossible to read. Your pages are too small and the writing is too small. Please have your pages at about 900 pixels high. It helps.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:08PM
theleast
at 4:59AM, Jan. 9, 2007
Hard to crit when so much of the text is virtually impossible to read. Larger pages please, and more contrast for the text against the background.
last edited on July 14, 2011 4:20PM
Bimbo_Zombie
at 3:09PM, Jan. 9, 2007
I guess that's what you get for having a screwed up scanner.
If I put it up in its origional size, you still wouldn't be able to read it becouse one panel would take up the entire page. So I shrink it. Unfortunatly that's hell to the quality of the picture. I fixed it some way though though.
If I put it up in its origional size, you still wouldn't be able to read it becouse one panel would take up the entire page. So I shrink it. Unfortunatly that's hell to the quality of the picture. I fixed it some way though though.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:22AM
Bimbo_Zombie
at 8:59PM, Jan. 11, 2007
Just a quik note, there IS more than one page. Unfortunaly the first page is a little screwed up for some reason, but I fixed that.
I can read the other pages fine with my glasses off.
I can read the other pages fine with my glasses off.
last edited on July 14, 2011 11:22AM
Crazy Dutchman
at 8:04AM, Jan. 12, 2007
I like it and I can see you can draw real well, BUT the coloring isn't always that great, and the font and textballoons don't quite match with the drawings. So I suggest this: Keep on going ('cause you're doing well) and pay some more attention to the pacing of the panels and the characters in them, and a little more to the coloring. If you'd also make text-balloons with a white background and a better font you're on your way to have an extremely cool comic ;)
So Bored (Zo verveeld)
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last edited on July 14, 2011 11:48AM
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