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[CRIT] Philly - The Superhero Comic
Ryan McLelland at 10:56AM, July 11, 2007
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Now that the first issue is ending I thought I'd post and see...what does everyone actually think of the comic???

http://www.drunkduck.com/Philly
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JustNoPoint at 11:45AM, July 11, 2007
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I'm really liking the book. You guys are doing great work.

I have one small thing I would like to critique however. Nothing negative on the comic itself. I just kinda wished you would make a different "comic" for all the pin ups and extras. Or put them in between issues. It kinda throws off the book a bit to be interrupted so much.

Keep up the great work!

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Ryan McLelland at 4:56PM, July 11, 2007
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That's a good mention...

I usually post those on 'off days' so even when there isn't a comic...there's at least something to look at even if it is a pinup or so...I always am in the thought that something is better than nothing...

But I'll keep that in mind...and maybe when issue 1 is done...I'll group them together ...
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steve_sloan at 5:24PM, July 11, 2007
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Ryan McLelland
Now that the first issue is ending I thought I'd post and see...what does everyone actually think of the comic???

http://www.drunkduck.com/Philly


I really like it a lot. The art is terrific and the story moves along nicely. Keep it up and I'll keep reading!
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Darth Mongoose at 3:25AM, July 12, 2007
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Group the fillers together or upload them into a separate gallery. It's nice when it's on the day to find even if there's no page, there's something there, but it's a different matter when you're reading through the archives, it really interrupts the flow of the comic having fillers between pages, especially multiple fillers, you're just flicking through them because you want to know what happens next, rather than appreciating them.
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Ryan McLelland at 4:42AM, July 12, 2007
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That is what I'm going to do :)
The end of issue one is tomorrow...so on Saturday I'll group them all together for a more cohesive issue one...

And then...? ISSUE TWO! :)

I'm so excited :)
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Ryan McLelland at 5:30AM, July 13, 2007
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PHILLY #1 finishes off today!

:)

YAY!

It's been a long time coming on this comic...the first issue was actually started on two years ago!!!! Issue 2 is coming very shortly...and I hope everyone will take the chance to go read the entire first issue!!!!

Thanks for reading :)

Ryan
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