Hello everyone.

I've been out of comics (reading AND drawing) for several years, and now I find myself with enough time on my hands to do something about it. I've begun a mystery crime noir and wanted some opinions on it.

a couple things to note are: (a) i know i should draw on larger pages and shrink them, but i am drawing this comic on a 6x8 sketchbook with a 0.5mm mechanical pencil (b) my impatience is sometimes apparent as i know my general shapes sometimes look a little odd.


anyway, i'll let you read it for yourself. thanks.

I've read all in order as you have on the disclaimer. and it's well penned.

The Stark Contrast of light and shadow fits the mood in my opinion.

There is that "The Cops are never arround when I need them" bit, but it still fit in.

I also Like the Scetchbook Rings. I been meaning to ask, Is that scanned in or an effect you added in? it makes it look good I think. adds character to the page itself.

I may not be the best on being a CRIT, But I had this FAVED before I saw your CRIT topic here. I like it alot, and is of the 4 Comics I've been plugging to all my cantact. Hope you get more hits soon.