http://www.drunkduck.com/No_Better_Place/index.php?p=502004

My first real comic, so I'm learning a lot as I go along. I know there's plenty wrong with it, so critiques would be lovely if you are so willing. :)

Well, I've read it. :)
The story seems interesting!
I like your inking, and I like the expression on the faces!
There are two things I can think of, if you're looking for constructive criticism.
Sometimes, in some panels (the first of page eleven, for example, I'm talking about the man) the torso of the characters seems a bit...squished. Perhaps you should look at pictures to get a better idea of how anatomy goes (I am no better than you, it's something I should do as well, but still...look at pictures of pretty boys! that never hurts! :) )
An absolutely minor nitpick you're totally free to ignore is that for a story set on the future, the clothes, and houses and stuff, don't really look "futuristic" to me.
But really, I am totally aware that is a minor nitpick, so if you like it the way it is now, then don't mind me. :)

But the story seems interesting, and the characters too (Ricky has charm!)
I think it's worth looking at and waiting to see what else will happen. :)

Ludeshka
Well, I've read it. :)
The story seems interesting!
I like your inking, and I like the expression on the faces!
There are two things I can think of, if you're looking for constructive criticism.
Sometimes, in some panels (the first of page eleven, for example, I'm talking about the man) the torso of the characters seems a bit...squished. Perhaps you should look at pictures to get a better idea of how anatomy goes (I am no better than you, it's something I should do as well, but still...look at pictures of pretty boys! that never hurts! :) )
An absolutely minor nitpick you're totally free to ignore is that for a story set on the future, the clothes, and houses and stuff, don't really look "futuristic" to me.
But really, I am totally aware that is a minor nitpick, so if you like it the way it is now, then don't mind me. :)

But the story seems interesting, and the characters too (Ricky has charm!)
I think it's worth looking at and waiting to see what else will happen. :)

Yeah I have trouble with anatomy sometimes, especially males because I don't draw them enough...I need more practice. :)

And that's an excellent point about the clothes/buildings! I was originally planning on having the story be closer to present day, so I when I decided to put it farther in the future a bit I didn't think to change my designs. I'll keep that in mind as I go along.

Thank you! :)