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[Crit] Ninja Shizatch
Rhykker at 8:41PM, Sept. 8, 2006
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My first webcomic - it used to be an animated flash series.

Three samurais set off on an epic quest, all the while parodying popular RPGs, satirizing a variety of themes, and just generally kicking some sweet, sweet ninja behind.

I'm tooling this webcomic to suit my readers - any comments or suggestions will be seriously considered, in regards to plot, characters, setting - ANYTHING, really. In other words, comments are greatly appreciated.

http://www.drunkduck.com/Ninja_Shizatch/index.php?p=86567
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Mark at 7:52AM, Sept. 9, 2006
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Dude your comic ROCKS!!

At first glance i thought it was really cliched, but from the moment I started reading the dialog, I knew it was all parody. Your jokes do have a bit of an 8 bit theatre feel to it though.

Apart from that your art is just sexy.

So awsome comic, keep it up.
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deletedbyrequest03 at 9:22AM, Sept. 10, 2006
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O_O THE ARTWORK IS AMAZING!!!! O_O

I LOVE your use of flash on this page:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Ninja_Shizatch/index.php?p=86598

Sorry, man, but I don't know how to critique it. It's funny, the artwork's awesome, and you amazed me right off the bat. It's pretty hard to get me amazed. Or not...

Well... I can't critique it. I just can't.

This year, school's full of BS!!!
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Rhykker at 11:58AM, Sept. 10, 2006
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Wow, thanks for all the great comments.

As for the Flash, I plan on making greater use of it in the future... Audio voice-overs, music, who knows... As long as I can keep the filesize small.
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flaak_monkey at 1:15PM, Sept. 10, 2006
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really nice comic. Art is good, and action packed.

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Rhykker at 3:49PM, Sept. 25, 2006
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PAGE 3 = WIN!

Thanks; hopefully you'll feel the same way about future pages.

really nice comic. Art is good, and action packed.

Thanks. I notice some comics will go several pages/strips without any action, so I'm going to try to go no more than 2 pages without any random violence.
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Rhykker at 3:58PM, Oct. 30, 2006
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Says not to plug more than once per month... Well over a month has passed since my last post in this thread.

Any critiques, now that I have a few more pages up? Anything at all, really.
last edited on July 14, 2011 3:06PM

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