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[CRIT] New humor web comic
mrquigley14 at 6:23PM, June 11, 2007
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Well. i finally decided to do some comics. I have a stranger sense of humor than a lot of people (it is MATURE so if you are young or do not like some racy language or ideas, please do not read it.
I just want to know if anyone else thinks they are funny at all. I know I am not the best artist (I am slowly improving) I care more I think about the humor content. Let me know what you think, even if you think it is horrible. I would rather change it than be misled. Thanks :-D
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mrquigley14 at 7:29PM, June 18, 2007
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(feel free to delete this if you think it has danced on the line of "once a month" rule)
Anywho, when I first posted this, I had like 6 comics up, and there wasn't much to critique, so, no one really did. I got maybe 1 comment, and 10 pageviews. I have been improving (barely) my artistic style and some of my humor and now am up to 33 comics, and figured that this would be a nice time to get it critiqued. Now that people can have stuff to compare it to, rather than 6 short not too good comics.

I also forgot to include the link in my first post
http://www.drunkduck.com/Short_Bus/
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mrquigley14 at 5:17PM, July 11, 2007
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So now my comic is a month and a day old. I have had a good deal of views. I would like a few more people to comment though. would be pretty cool. I moved from doing 5 daily updates, to doing only 1 a day, to keep my mind a little more fresh. Feel free to comment here and Bump this topic, or to leave a comment on the page itself.

www.drunkduck.com/Short_Bus/
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n_y_japlander at 12:54AM, July 12, 2007
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You are right by saying your sense of humor is off the beaten path... You have originality and good sense of space within each frame. Your penmenship needs some TLC. most of the frames are hard to read.
Keep on keeping on!
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