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[CRIT] New comic - need some guidance!
theends at 12:12PM, April 14, 2009
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Hey everyone - I'm new to the webcomic scene, and I'm looking some critiques.

I think I've got something really unique, twisted, and fun to read going on here. But who cares what I think, right? What do you think?
www.drunkduck.com/The_Ends


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Ryuthehedgewolf at 4:28PM, April 14, 2009
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Holy hell!
I love your artwork, it's very professional looking, the color just adds to it!
I can't give you ANY crits about your artwork, because personally, I can't find any.

But the buttons on your page "previous, yadda yadda" seem a little cramped. Maybe you could increase the size of the buttons? Maybe make them blend in with the background? I dunno. That's all I can personally think of. But keep up the amazing work!
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theends at 6:47PM, April 14, 2009
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Thanks man, and I'll see what I can do for those buttons once I get some time on my hands. Thanks for reading!

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Pineapple at 5:42AM, April 15, 2009
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Personally it's not something I would read, but it is a very good comic. If you are active in the forums, or leave comments on other people’s comics I think you could get a few readers.
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harkovast at 5:58AM, May 29, 2009
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being active on the forums, commenting on other peoples comics a lot are a good way to get noticed.
With regard to your comic, dont change anything.
Keep doing just what you are right now, it is cool!
Post apocolyptic worlds have been done to death ever since mad max 2, but you have genuinely managed to make your vision seem horribly disturbing and intriguing, even to a jaded bastard like me.
Go make more!

For more Harkovast related goings on, go to the Harkovast Forum
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brightga at 3:51PM, May 29, 2009
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The art is essentially flawless. Good writing, too.
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