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AQua_ng at 12:26PM, June 2, 2006

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One boy with a mind of a genius but the experience of a five year old. Watch his antics with his friends Joe and Tom.

I appreciate some criticism from you guys to help me on my way.

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Mimarin at 1:12PM, June 2, 2006

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Uhm yes, goodness abound in this one, i have to say im not fond of your lines, but everything else is good, theres plot, plot is nice, there is funny which is also nice and the art is entierly acceptable.

Really, goodness!

Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.

Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!

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AQua_ng at 1:15PM, June 2, 2006

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Lines? What is this "lines" you speak about?

No seriously, what are the lines? I don't understand.

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Mimarin at 1:16PM, June 2, 2006

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the lines, you know, on the things.

Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.

Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!

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AQua_ng at 1:22PM, June 2, 2006

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The lines on the panels, or the outlines on the characters?

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Mimarin at 1:38PM, June 2, 2006

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the second one. on the characters. i dont like them.

Of course you will. All intelligent beings dream. Nobody knows why.

Also, tell random people they are awsome! it helps!

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AQua_ng at 11:11AM, June 3, 2006

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Okay, I'll try that for my next one and see how that goes.

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AQua_ng at 11:43AM, June 3, 2006

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*You*? Are you saying I have two personalities?!

Tone it down Aqua, you're giving me a headache.

Sorry Ng.

I'm going to try it anyway.

No I'm not.

Shut the fuck up.

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ccs1989 at 12:09PM, June 3, 2006

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I recommend not making everything looks so...MS Paintish. On the latest page, with that depressed characters, it would look better if they were dark purplish-blue and thin.

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AQua_ng at 12:14PM, June 3, 2006

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but do you mean the first page? If that is what you meant, that was my fault. I saved it as a .jpeg.

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SpANG at 12:42PM, June 10, 2006

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Evian is Naive backwards.

Is that why yoru handle is AQua???? :shock:

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AQua_ng at 1:04PM, June 10, 2006

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Yes. It's only a coincidence that my intials and surname is A_Quang. Evian's the true reason for it.

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